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message 501: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments *sobs*


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments :(
:(
:(

*Cries too*.

If you see her last few videos, it's so sad. She's buying all this makeup for Halloween and stuff, and she didn't know...


message 503: by Dana (new)

Dana (danachewy) | 735 comments Saru (Queen of Bookland) wrote: ":(
:(
:(

*Cries too*.

If you see her last few videos, it's so sad. She's buying all this makeup for Halloween and stuff, and she didn't know..."


*goes off to check*


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments It's so sad :(


message 505: by Dana (new)

Dana (danachewy) | 735 comments :(


message 507: by Dana (new)

Dana (danachewy) | 735 comments :(


message 509: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments C-C-COMBO BREAKER


message 510: by Katarina (new)

Katarina | 491 comments Made everybody sad!!!


message 511: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments :(


message 513: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments I HAZ WRITTEN ZE POEEM

Blood and Glass

In my lifetime, I have seen a million broken bones
a thousand broken hearts
a hundred broken minds
But I have only ever seen one broken soul
and that was yours
You may have had bones of steel
but you had a spirit made of glass
fragile glass
So fragile that it could be fractured by steel swords
or a sharp wit
or even the steady softness of love
You shattered
Done in by the many cracks
etched across your being
I walked among your remains
and tried to put you back together
But your pieces were small and sharp
They cut me when I held them in my hand
so that my blood flowed in rivers among your broken soul
Trying to heal
but to no avail


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments *Sobs*.

BEAUTIFUL.


message 515: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments If I made it longer, I would call it, To All the Broken People


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments *Cries harder*,


message 517: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments *hands Saru a tissue*


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments *blows nose*.


message 519: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Oh, actually, that tissue was dirty.


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments *Throws the tissue at Sevs face*.


message 521: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments *dodges it and laughs diabolically*


message 522: by Dana (new)

Dana (danachewy) | 735 comments *sobs more*

LOVE. Don't give me a tissue, though.


message 523: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Emily wrote: "C-C-COMBO BREAKER"


I'm glad nobody caught on to the fact I'm using a three-year-old meme.


message 524: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments Lol…I didn't know it was that old.


message 525: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments I looked it up and actually it's 7 years old.


message 526: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments @Emily

Maaaaaaan…it doesn't feel that old. I'm behind on my memes….


message 527: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments A little snippet that I could use in a poem sometime:

So break my heart; that's okay
It's not like I was using it before you came along


message 528: by Dana (new)

Dana (danachewy) | 735 comments Write the poem! Write the poem! *chants*

Seriously, write the poem so I can fangirl over it :3


message 529: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments I would totally write the poem! Only that's all I've got and. Have no idea what to make it about.


message 530: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Poor lonely Jude. *pats Jude on the head* How tall are you?


message 531: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Like, short or tall?


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments SEV ME LIKE THAT LINE.


message 534: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Like over five feet? Taller?


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments Saru (Queen of Bookland) wrote: "SEV ME LIKE THAT LINE."


message 536: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Oookay I wrote the poem.


They always said I was the smart one
but I think I'm losing my mind.
Oh, wait, it's already lost
I dropped it when I saw you and you found it and cut it up
then tried to put it back in my head
but it doesn't fit anymore
I guess that's why I feel so numb
as if my insides are iced over
but I can't feel a thing.
So break my heart; that's okay
it's not like I was using it before you came along.
You ripped away my shield of common sense
stripped my frigid armor
peeled off my tough skin
until you were left with one fragile beating heart
But you didn't know what to do with it, did you?
You tried to do it right but you did it all wrong
And silly me, I didn't know to correct you because no one had ever made me feel so naked.
Maybe it's my fault
But I'm pretty sure it's yours
So, here, take my twisted, broken heart
and my useless mind-
See if you can make something out of them
something better that what they are now
because I can't use them anymore
Here's your second chance.
Take it.


message 537: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments Love it.


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments Sev–I tried being normal once. It was horrible. wrote: "Oookay I wrote the poem.


They always said I was the smart one
but I think I'm losing my mind.
Oh, wait, it's already lost
I dropped it when I saw you and you found it and cut it up
then tried to ..."


YESYESYESYES.


message 539: by Katarina (new)

Katarina | 491 comments The beginning to my book, I need to add scenery. To help Invision though. :/
"How's this happening?," my mom was pacing my dreadfully empty living room.
"Ma'am please take a breath and calm down," the police officer said while sipping her hot chocolate.
" Stay calm," the disgust in her voice would give anybody shivers.


message 540: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Taylor [Pardon me while I fanboy over you] wrote: "Love it."

What about it do you love?


Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~ | 3061 comments Taylor [Pardon me while I fanboy over you] wrote: "Love it."

ooh Sam likey.
AND YOU USED THOSE LINES FROM BEFORE YAYAYAY.
yeah, those are definitely my favorite part. :)


message 542: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments It's very conversational. Like my poetry.


message 543: by Sevania (last edited Aug 13, 2013 06:10PM) (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Yes, I've learned a ton about poetry from you since I joined this group!


message 544: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments *melts into a puddle of writer*


message 545: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments *stares*


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments *stares too*.


message 547: by Katarina (new)

Katarina | 491 comments *sticks a straw in and starts drinking Taylor. Hoping that she can get his poetic talents.


message 548: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments Hahaha, bold move. XD


Saru (Queen of Bookland) (sarulovesbooks) | 3290 comments That it is.


message 550: by Katarina (new)

Katarina | 491 comments Fank. You.


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