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Sevania
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Aug 09, 2013 05:14PM

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*Cries too*.
If you see her last few videos, it's so sad. She's buying all this makeup for Halloween and stuff, and she didn't know...

:(
:(
*Cries too*.
If you see her last few videos, it's so sad. She's buying all this makeup for Halloween and stuff, and she didn't know..."
*goes off to check*
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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Blood and Glass
In my lifetime, I have seen a million broken bones
a thousand broken hearts
a hundred broken minds
But I have only ever seen one broken soul
and that was yours
You may have had bones of steel
but you had a spirit made of glass
fragile glass
So fragile that it could be fractured by steel swords
or a sharp wit
or even the steady softness of love
You shattered
Done in by the many cracks
etched across your being
I walked among your remains
and tried to put you back together
But your pieces were small and sharp
They cut me when I held them in my hand
so that my blood flowed in rivers among your broken soul
Trying to heal
but to no avail

I'm glad nobody caught on to the fact I'm using a three-year-old meme.

So break my heart; that's okay
It's not like I was using it before you came along
message 535:
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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They always said I was the smart one
but I think I'm losing my mind.
Oh, wait, it's already lost
I dropped it when I saw you and you found it and cut it up
then tried to put it back in my head
but it doesn't fit anymore
I guess that's why I feel so numb
as if my insides are iced over
but I can't feel a thing.
So break my heart; that's okay
it's not like I was using it before you came along.
You ripped away my shield of common sense
stripped my frigid armor
peeled off my tough skin
until you were left with one fragile beating heart
But you didn't know what to do with it, did you?
You tried to do it right but you did it all wrong
And silly me, I didn't know to correct you because no one had ever made me feel so naked.
Maybe it's my fault
But I'm pretty sure it's yours
So, here, take my twisted, broken heart
and my useless mind-
See if you can make something out of them
something better that what they are now
because I can't use them anymore
Here's your second chance.
Take it.

They always said I was the smart one
but I think I'm losing my mind.
Oh, wait, it's already lost
I dropped it when I saw you and you found it and cut it up
then tried to ..."
YESYESYESYES.

"How's this happening?," my mom was pacing my dreadfully empty living room.
"Ma'am please take a breath and calm down," the police officer said while sipping her hot chocolate.
" Stay calm," the disgust in her voice would give anybody shivers.
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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ooh Sam likey.
AND YOU USED THOSE LINES FROM BEFORE YAYAYAY.
yeah, those are definitely my favorite part. :)
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