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In David Colvert's nonfiction biography book "Thomas Edison", Edison happens to be a very good hardworking man at a young age and there might be even better news ahead. Edison was born with not a lot of technology. There were telegraph and trains, but nothing much more than that. Edison grew up having trouble learning. That's why his mother taught him. As he got older, he started knowing a lot. He was still learning even though he was a little deaf. Edison went through that time and no one still knows why he was deaf. Edison loved being in the train station, it was his place where he could connect to the world. He loved telegraphs and how they interest him. Starting off, Edison was selling newspaper on the trains. He got so much business he got some workers. Edison grew up always wanting to make the things in the world easier for people like the telegraph. Still at a young age, he didn't know much about the telegraph so he always tried to receive messages from real operators to practice. One day, a child was on the tracks and Edison risked his life to save the child. That gave him the chance to learn about how the telegraph works because the child's parents promised him as a reward. Edison got older and he started having some chances of working as a telegraph operator which taught him a lot. He soon started making the telegraph better. Edison worked with some businessmen and then he got a house for his family and a lab so he can work with his assistants On page 47, the author wrote, "Edison has designed Menlo Park so he and the Boys are working inside a giant chemistry set and machine shop. Anything they might need is at hand." This showed how Edison had a whole ton of support by his finger tips. He had what he needed to invent and help him succeed for more. That also makes me predict about Edison's future before I read it. I predict that Edison will start upgrading the telegraph and making a whole ton of inventions in this lab. That's because Edison got a lot of support. Edison was all alone so he couldn't succeed at first, but now he has tons of help from his team and the materials he has for more. Plus, Edison knows a lot more than he used to from working at the train station. That's my prediction on Edison's future from what I just read.


"They needed more clues about the code. They needed memories." this quote shows that i think he may try to get sting so he can go "chageing" so we can try to recall memories from it.


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