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message 101: by Dini (new)

Dini my love overflows
as I see the face of the
one who got away


message 102: by Robbie (last edited Aug 04, 2008 06:45PM) (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments one who got away
was ten times bigger than this
itsy-bitsy one


message 103: by Meghan (new)

Meghan itsy-bitsy one
lost amonst all the boxes
I don't like packing


message 104: by Dini (new)

Dini I don't like packing
things strewn all over the place
dunno where to start


message 105: by Rachel (new)

Rachel | 25 comments dunno where to start...
hours tick by, the pressure mounts,
deadline approaching


message 106: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments deadline approaching
I will work all through the night
the morning birds sing


Abigail (42stitches) | 4 comments The morning birds sing
too loud at noon. I was up
way too late last night.


message 108: by Dini (new)

Dini way too late last night
I was up with a book I--
couldn't stop reading


message 109: by Novin (new)

Novin couldn't stop reading
a long old poem which I-
found in the basement



message 110: by Dini (new)

Dini found in the basement
old pictures from my childhood
what fond memories!


message 111: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments what fond memories
carefree days, doing nothing
true quality time


Abigail (42stitches) | 4 comments True quality time
reading a beloved book
always together


message 113: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments always together
shakers of salt and pepper
the spices of life


message 114: by Dini (new)

Dini the spices of life
helps you through the ups and downs
for a brighter day


message 115: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments For a brighter day
Wash with Tide and brush with Gleem
You'll need to wear shades!


message 116: by Dini (new)

Dini you'll need to wear shades
under the blue, cloudless sky
walking hand in hand


message 117: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments walking hand in hand
our toes sinking into sand
while our new love grows


message 118: by Dini (new)

Dini while our new love grows
we sit down and wait for the
baby on the way


message 119: by Robbie (last edited Dec 24, 2008 01:40PM) (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments baby on the way
trembling with joy and with fear
we're consumed by love



message 120: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments we're consumed by love
but love doesn't pay the bills
or buy us more stuff


message 121: by Meghan (new)

Meghan or buy us more stuff
my kids all shout with glee, or
throw a fit will we


message 122: by Meghan (new)

Meghan throw a fit will we
a tired mother thinks, ha!
I beat you to it.


message 123: by Gerda (new)

Gerda (Libtech) | 16 comments What a fun jingle!
something we can dance to
but not in heels


message 124: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments "but not in heels!"
she shouted from the dance floor
kicking off her shoes


message 125: by Jo (new)

Jo (Penname8) Kicking off her shoes
My friend does not hesitate
To go in the pool.


message 126: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments To go in the pool
my troubles are splashed away
my soul is at peace


message 127: by Jo (new)

Jo (Penname8) My soul is at peace
When I see the fading star
When I look at pearls.


message 128: by Gerda (new)

Gerda (Libtech) | 16 comments When I look at pearls
Dreams of weddings float to the top


message 129: by Gerda (new)

Gerda (Libtech) | 16 comments When I look at pearls
Dreams of weddings float tot the top
like salty tears


message 130: by Jo (new)

Jo (Penname8) Like salty tears, see
Is four syllables, my friend.
And we'll continue.


message 131: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments And we'll continue
plodding through our dreary days
with heads hanging low


message 132: by [deleted user] (new)

with heads hanging low
wondering why this thread is dead
just beginning Haiku


message 133: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments just beginning Haiku
to resusitate at last
this lost, lonely thread


message 134: by Karl (new)

Karl Grass | 5 comments onto the red fox
eyes blazing, fire shines brightly
spirit in the night


message 135: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments spirit in the night
exchanging ghostly glances
with loved ones below


message 136: by Jason (new)

Jason Kirk (brasswax) | 1 comments what a fun jingle!
slang sashays for days, lingo
swings like bingo wings


message 137: by Karl (new)

Karl Grass | 5 comments swings like bingo wings
soaring breathlessly on high
Reveals life's beauty


message 138: by [deleted user] (new)

Reveals life's beauty
does a bug in grass, and then
it's on the concrete


message 139: by [deleted user] (new)

it's on the concrete
that cigarette butts lie
wasted and forlorn


message 140: by [deleted user] (last edited Jan 03, 2016 01:01PM) (new)

wasted and forlorn
silent like an animal
the church lies


message 141: by SHUN (new)

SHUN | 1 comments The church lies
Within the hearts of this
underrated thread


message 142: by Dawson (new)

Dawson Hirl | 1 comments underrated thread
is what we are posting on
fifty cucumbers


message 143: by Janet (new)

Janet Li | 1 comments Fifty cucumbers
All chopped up in green goodness
My stomach grumbles


message 144: by Danny (new)

Danny Haledon | 1 comments My stomach grumbles
Something is missing...hear?
Trouble with turnstiles


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