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Self Challenge: 3 books in 12 Months.
I'm here to report another good day of writing, Elle!!! Had an unexpected plot twist happen today, I think (hope!) it will make the story run much smoother.I'm DYING to spill the beans about what's going on, but I'm going to stay strong!!!
Louise-Lesley (Elle) wrote: "WOOP!I haven't been doing very good at cheerleading. Lets blame revision!!!"
How's the revising coming??? Just out of curiosity: I don't suppose you know anything about mines and miners, do you???
LOL! FUNNY DD.I know loads of crap I could tell you.
I'm free not. Let's sing a song of happinesssssss!
Come on little friends as we all sing a happy little working song! Merry little voices clear and strong.
Jud (Disney Diva) wrote: "Come on little friends as we all sing a happy little working song! Merry little voices clear and strong."NOW I'm singing that song Jud!!!
Who are we going to do the AHHHHH AGGGGGG AHHHHH bit???
Louise-Lesley (Elle) wrote: "Awk I just read your wee short story in the book. It was fantastic!"Yay!!!
I'm soooooo glad you liked it Elle!!!
Louise-Lesley (Elle) wrote: ":D made me even more keen to make you finish your books ;)"Oh blast!!! Now you have expectations!!! ;-P
*Must work HARDER*
Louise-Lesley (Elle) wrote: "LOL!expectations didn't change much, i already knew you were awesome!"
Awww, stop!
*Blush*
What were you saying??? ;-P
Louise-Lesley (Elle) wrote: "HAHA!Would you like me to continue singing your praise?!?!"
Well I don't want to force you or anything!!! ;-P
Still on track!I'm now right in the thick of the plot: Deeta's in trouble, the Andaks are in trouble, the Marshals are in trouble: everyone's in trouble!!!
Louise-Lesley (Elle) wrote: "YAY! Go DD!!!!!!!!!!
Chocolate for you?!?!"
Ooo, please!
Brownie for you???
Still on track, just written a fight scene and I always get a little bit nervous with fight scenes. Poor old Ralph lost his cool and tensions are high, Robin's had to act as peacemaker.
D.D. wrote: "Still on track, just written a fight scene and I always get a little bit nervous with fight scenes. Poor old Ralph lost his cool and tensions are high, Robin's have to act as peacemaker."
The first rule I have for fight scenes is to ask how competent/trained are the fighters.
If neither are trained then there is going to be a lot of posturing and both are going to end up a bit messed up, but there's probably as much dialogue as action. With this sort of thing you could have a lot of fun with your dialogue
If both are trained then it's going to be a bit slow until there is some rapid action which will end with one of them out of it or both still on their feet, still circling the other. They are unlikely to waste any breath in talking
If only one is trained it will end very quickly, and badly for the one who isn't
Louise-Lesley (Elle) wrote: "I really need to read the first damn book so i have any clue what you are on about"Lol!!!
Ginger also tries to force Meg in to betraying Victor in this scene. ;-P
Jud (Disney Diva) wrote: "I recommend it too, Elle"Emma (The Underwear Queen) wrote: "You really must read it Elle! I lived Broken City :-)"
Thank you Jud and Emz!!! xxx
Have I told you how much I love you lately??? ;-P
Jim wrote: "D.D. wrote: "Still on track, just written a fight scene and I always get a little bit nervous with fight scenes. Poor old Ralph lost his cool and tensions are high, Robin's have to act as peacema..."
Both are VERY well trained, but the fight is between friends and is a outlet for worry and hurt. So only one of them actually wants to fight.
Louise-Lesley (Elle) wrote: "Oh frig me, you are just gonna tease until i read it aren't you?!"This is soooo much fun!!!
*Evil grin*
So then Thor arrives and he's like; stop with the posturing lads, my angles and plains are the most awesome. Jan snorts and asks him if he's even SEEN Ryder's bountiful muscles and Deeta asks him if he finds it difficult to find shirts in the right size...
Louise-Lesley (Elle) wrote: "Woop. Go DDAnd poor Ryder, whoever he is."
He's Tom's brother.
Like that makes anything clearer!!! ;-P
Jud (Disney Diva) wrote: "Stop giving away spoilers DD!!!"You don't want to hear any more about Thor, Ginger, Meg and Victor??? What about the chocolate swimming pool???
I'm very proud to announce that I have just finished my 1000 words for today an I am now 40.000 words in to 'Truce'!!!
I have been SOOOOO good today, Elle!!!Not only did I make dinner (home made fish cakes with stir fried veg.) AND go to the dentist to be root canalled (painful!), but I STILL did my 1000 words of 'Truce'!!!
Now that is what I call dedicated!
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Karen (Kew) wrote: "Now that is what I call dedicated!;0)"
Lol!
That's what Amy said! To be honest I'm just scared out of my tiny mind that if I let myself backslide I'll never manage to get back on track!
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I'm back on track and still full of ideas, so far so good!!!