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What time is it?
9:50am I don't wanna go skiing... But I promised to it least ski once so... Blah.
9:27pm reading and trying not to eavesdrop
7:41 AM"It's time for school, it's time for school, it's time for school!" ~Finding Nemo
3:06 PM I wish to skip ahead to next week or even Friday, cus its an ER day.
7:12am Wondering what main lesson I have to take with the fresh man.
5:38 PM Helping Cass do hw...actually I'm on the internet and watching TV she's doing hw.
3:15pm I come back to read this...smhTaylor [formerly Timothy] wrote: "@Nate
I know the feeling. Revising prose is the bloody HARDEST thing I've done. Try reading it aloud. That always helps me figure things out on the storytelling level.
WAIT. Scratch that.
I don't..."
Tim giving Nate advice...I'm pretty sure stranger things have happened but WOW!!!
Lol
1:07pm ugh I thought it was gonna stay being a slow day at work but it sped up man I'm baked
How are you feeling yucky, Kyle? I'm not feeling so great myself...work kinda screwed me over last night.
10:23 AM Hi Ho Hi HO its off to work I go
3:16 PM Just got off work. The splitter jammed, we had to split a good lot of the wood the old fashion way, by hand. My shoulder hurts.
@KyleDo you ever have back pain as a symptom of sickness? Like, with a migraine or something? That's a common issue for me...it hurts to stand or even sit. I need to be lying on the carpet or it hurts.
7:20 AM Its a go. Me a few mates are gonna tear up the mountain.
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It's is 1 minutes till 11pm and I'm gonna go to bed now. I gots school tomorrow. Blah. Night.
1:47pm watching the fifth grade class, waiting until the end to take my picture for my school report. Blaaaaaah
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Just saw Source Code for the first time. The junk did I just watch?
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Why does the source code sound familiar?
3:50 PM Replacing the filters on the DB, & waiting for Cass to call.
3:52 Speak of the Angel.... wings must be broken she needs a ride to work.
19 minutes! Record time. 4:14 PM Dropped Cass off. smh Why do kids always gravitate towards me, is it cus they know I dislike them?
4:50 PM Now I have grease all over the lap top...
7:28 PM Looks like I don't have to pick Cass up, Murphey's are gonna give her a ride home
8:19 PM Cass is trying to agitate me with plans for later this week, I'm making idle threats as to I'll do if she carries these plans out.
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I feel like I know every single detail of Nate's life now.
ikr I was killing time 1:55 AM Finishing up with some documents to send out.
3:07 AM I need to kill about 2 1/2 hours. Then I can go to work.
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Most people sleep at that time of night, dearie.
1:21 AMThinking about methods for falling asleep.
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Timmy's been here this whole time and hasn't been telling me stories?
You get your behind over to story time right now, Mister.
3:32 AM Roof top golf anyone? It'll kill some time and hopefully scare away the deer or whatever keeps tripping the motion lights.
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Champ, be a dear and get your butt to story time as well. (:
10:39 AM At work, waiting for the chipper to be fixed.
I know the feeling. Revising prose is the bloody HARDEST thing I've done. Try reading it aloud. That always helps me figure things out on the storytelling level.
WAIT. Scratch that.
I don't know how long it's been since you drafted your story, but if it's been less than a month, stop looking to revise. Revision takes a fresh set of eyes.