Any one here to judge a would be releasing book from it's summary?

[Jr]

A truly awe inspiring piece of article it was that I had just read. It's these kinds of words that inspire me to add that touch of beauty that makes robust men drown. Cheers~

[Sharon]

I am going to be perfectly frank. I hope that, when you are ready to release your book, it is better edited than its summary.

[Andrew]

Is English your first langauge Jupitar? I sort of suspect not. Which is fine, but I suspect from your posts here that your novel is going to need extra proofreading and editing before it's ready to meet an audience.

[Jr]

Content-wise I doubt it misses anything. But as it has been said, a touch of improvement to the words themselves may need be done.

[Sharon]

Jupitar wrote: "Sharon wrote: "I am going to be perfectly frank. I hope that, when you are ready to release your book, it is better edited than its summary."

Can you point out the flaws in it so that I can improve?"

First of all, you have numerous misspellings, including in the title of this post. I can understand if English is not your first language,but you really do need to vet the spelling and grammar.

[Debbie's Spurts (D.A.)]

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[Justin]

I think you offended the poor guy, he deleted his membership lol.