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message 1: by Lissa (new)

Lissa (parisbvamp) | 64 comments I have a teen novel urban fantasy part one of two that I would like someone to look at. It's about 63k, so not short. Anyone got time?


message 2: by C. (new)

C. Kennedy | 184 comments I'll take a look at it, if you like, and so long as you don't need a response until the end of the month or so.
C~


message 3: by Lissa (new)

Lissa (parisbvamp) | 64 comments I'm not in a rush, but I'd like to have it back to work on by the beginning of December. my email is paris b vamp at yahoo if you want I can email it in doc form.


message 4: by K (new)

K (k-polipetl) | 4090 comments Hi Lissa

If you can hang on till after 16th November, I have a free weekend when I can read for you (it will be good to have something nice to look forward to after my exam!)

Do you want just a general read through or a full beta?

K


message 5: by Lissa (new)

Lissa (parisbvamp) | 64 comments I'm looking for holes to fix. More content than grammar if you get what I mean.


message 6: by K (new)

K (k-polipetl) | 4090 comments continuity, eh moments and erm, I've read that 3 times and I don't think it's meant to say what I think it says??

(things my beta reader delights in telling me ... in highlighter pen all over the place)


message 7: by Lissa (new)

Lissa (parisbvamp) | 64 comments LOL, K. Yeah continuity stuff. Highlighter pen, scary.


message 8: by K (new)

K (k-polipetl) | 4090 comments Lissa wrote: "LOL, K. Yeah continuity stuff. Highlighter pen, scary."

LOL, happy to do you a read through next weekend if that's okay with you time wise... no highlighters I promise

I'll drop you an e-mail.


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