Story Ideas with no problem

[Seth]

STORY IDEAS ALERT: Dreige (pronounced Drayje) is a lab guinypig (sp?), along with some other teenagers. They are constantly monitored by a group of ppl (yeah . . . ideas?) and are getting tested constantly. The tests are vigourous and horrible, but what can they do about it? Thats about it . . . Idk i just got it from the xbox game Portal: Still Alive . . .

And the other: The Sencors' began right at the brink of the earths creation. Their faces are featureless, no eyes, mouth or nose. They sense everything through their hands. They took over the humans around the industrial evolution. And thats basically it . . . >< so lame

[Amy, Writer Blocked in Chief]

For the first one; it's guinea pig, not guiny pig. Um... the group of people could be... mad, corrupted, communist (jk) scientists doing it for money? Or maybe they are being made as wepons, and are like prodotypes, and they are being made to fight but relly support the other side?

the second one... you need a PLOT for that one. It could be the conquering of people in t he 1700s

[Paul]

Are they really guinea pigs? Or are they people fulfilling that role? (Yes, you can have teenage guinea pigs.

Second, it should be 'Sensors'. Take the trouble to spell things right. That's what spell check is for. Not to do it is just being rude and disrespectful to the people who have to take the time to read it.

[Seth]

Yeah, I changed it to that.

[Olivia]

also, for the "lab guinea pigs" what is the plot line? are they escaping, finding out who incarcerated them, fighting back maximum ride style, etc???

[Amy, Writer Blocked in Chief]

don't do Max Ride style. That's taken. :-)

[Trish]

Brilliant! Thank you Bill! :)

[Leiko]

That is so cool. Even though I'm still in school.

[Paul]

Nice one Bill.

I have one technique - stop in the middle of a sentence. The next day, finish that sentence - you already know what it is you were going to write, 'cos you knew it yesterday.

Then, having got that far, having finished the sentence, the words are already flowing. The next sentence comes,and the next and the...

[Amy, Writer Blocked in Chief]

interesting idea...

[Annabell]

Awesome Bill! Reading that made me feel inspired to write even more. Thanks! :)

[Amy, Writer Blocked in Chief]

:-)