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What makes a great Character?
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One character I don't remember is Peeta Melark in the Hunger Games. I just never could remember what he looked like and I don't remember the book describing him very well. He didn't stand out in the book even though he was a main character in the book. The movie gave me a much better understanding of Peeta than in the book.








The characters I forget are like the ones in "Where the Red Fern Grows." The main character was a kid who lived on a farm and hunted raccoon. The only reason I read the book was because we where forced to.


Now Jack is the exact opposite. In a different novel Jack believes that love is the biggest load of crap ever. He thinks that people can live happily alone and that love should stay in fairy tale books not in real life. Jack didn't have this belief until his parents had gotten divorced two years. He was growing up with the bitterness that his parents had between each other and that was the only "love" that Jack had known. If that was love Jack wanted nothing to do with. He was a bitter young boy that was written by the author to keep the conflict throughout the story. But once the new girl Olivia came to school and immediately fell for Jack she knew that she could change him. Olivia's love and good heart would change Jack's views on romance.
I have read many different kind of novels with different characters whom may both be lovable but are written to express it in many ways by the author to make the story their own.




In my book, The Adoration of Jenna Fox, by Mary E. Pearson, the main character Jenna has a great personality. In the story, she is funny, very smart, and a great person. I think what makes her an awesome character, is that the author includes many back stories of Jenna, and that really defines her character and who she really is.

In the Hunger Games, you get to know that Katniss cares about people, and especially her family. In the book, you can guess what she is going to do, based on that fact.
If your character is well developed, readers should be able to guess what they are going to do next in the story, and be able to explain why.





I am currently reading Such Wicked Intent by Kenneth Oppel. The main character is Victor Frankenstein (as in the scientist who made the famous monster). Victor is turning into a very memorable character for me, because he represents everything I am not in characteristic qualities. For starters, he is highly temperamental. Whenever another character questions him, he immediately feels they are questioning his intelligence and becomes enraged (I am fairly quiet, especially if I feel outsmarted). He is also passionate about the sciences and discovering the mysteries of the world (I think these mysteries are what make life interesting). He is willing to put himself in danger in order to discover the meaning of life (Yeah, I am just a scaredy cat). Finally, I think that Victor, despite everything I wrote above, represents your average teenage: he yearns to be loved, he wants to learn, he is scared of death and losing those he loves (Ok, so I can relate to him when it comes to those things).

Some characters are meant to stay vivid in our minds throughout the story, while others are more vague and absent. Writers use certain things in their stories to make a character come to life. They give them traits that real people would have; being scared of spiders, having a weakness for chocolate, or having a passion for sports. Whatever these traits may be, it helps with the illusion that they are real people in a real environment. Another big one is, of course, emotions. Some people may be stoic and brave, while others may be bashful and introverted. Adding emotion may seem obvious, but it adds color and life to a character that would otherwise be quite dreary and boring.
In the short stories I have read in my novel about Mars, the characters have been brave, kindhearted, and assertive. They need these qualities for their own survival in such a harsh environment like Mars. While they are firm and strong, they still have the weaknesses and emotions that everyone else in the world may have. Sadness, excitement, curiosity and many others make for a living, breathing, character that many would accept as realistic in society today.

The book I have been reading is called ten things we did (and probably shoudln't have) by Sarah Mylynowski. This book is very exciting and i recomend this book to any young teenage girl who likes to read about many interesting characters.




For example, in my book that I am currently reading, one of the main characters, Hanna, really stands out to me. Maybe it’s because she used to be the heaviest one of her friends and now she’s the thinnest, but the way she made that happen made me pay closer attention to her. She started making herself throw up after she ate in eighth grade and has almost recovered, yet she still does it every once in a while. Also Hanna used to be one of the most unpopular girls in her grade and since she became thin, she is now one of the most popular. Also since becoming thin, beautiful and popular, Hanna has become an arrogant, self- centered person. She no longer talks to her true friends, but hangs out with a girl named Mona, who isn’t someone I would ever want to be friends with. Before, when she wasn’t so popular and thin, she was one of the sweetest girls you could think of. All of these changes is what really made Hanna stand out to me as a character, not necessarily in a good way either.
Characters may stand out to me in a good way and a bad way, but I always find myself more drawn in to the characters that are completely relatable, or completely opposite of who I am. Either way, the way the characters act in the book really makes them stand out and every single one of them is different from the next.

But the best authors can make you remember characters. The author makes them people you want to remember, and they have reasoning behind it. For example, in the novel, The Outsiders, I remember PonyBoy all the time. I always quote things from him and keep him in the back of my mind. Why you may ask? Because he's memorable. He to me is someone I connected with, and that I will remember for years to come. He's very courageous, and a little rebel. He lives with his brother, which shows how close of a relationship they have. My brother and I are very close, and although I may not be as much of a rebel as PonyBoy, I still like to feel like I am. PonyBoy also was good at heart. He puts on this tough facade when in reality, all he wanted to do help people, and be the best he could be at everything he does. And that to me, is memorable.






A non memorable character is someone who isn't described enough for you to relate. If a character isn't explain or giving visual features for you to imagine, it is harder for you to remember and associate with a certain character. I think that why you remember the way a character looks and acts instead of just telling the story of the character.

So in conclusion, the personality and traits are the most important aspect of a character. Funny and unpredictable characters tend to be memorable, while quiet, boring,and bland characters tend to be forgettable.



That is why I believe that my character; Liam Bergstrom is a very memorable character, he had talked to the coach about what he wanted too. His personality and how he reacts to people’s opinions is very memorable too, because he doesn’t know if he agrees with the prayers in the locker room before all their games but yet he still says them. For me, that is what makes a character memorable.



He seemed to be a nice enough person. Mick is considerate and is very competitive which I can relate to because I am also very competitive.
When Mick first got in high school he was bumped up in football right away but all the coaches said he wasn't big enough so he started to buy protein shakes and exercise which helped at first but then he hit the wall. He got better but he still wasn't good enough to get the starting spot so he looked for an edge. That's when the "Gym Candy" got involved.
Up to that point in the story I thought Mick was a strong willed, give it your all type of person. After that my thoughts about him completely changed but it got me hooked in the story. After that he completely changed and became more aggressive towards his friends, and rage towards his family.




David I would have to agree with you, when a character is funny or weird in a certain situation it makes me laugh too.

I will also remember the character of Katniss as someone who was just trying to retain who she was as an individual. She didn't want to be told who she was by anyone: the Capitol, Peeta, Gale. To me, that is the best thing you can fight for.