Blood Promise
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Dimitri and Rose.
sorry i know it's really long. i've been writing it for two days.
its ok its SOO GOOD! plz write more wen u can!!! plzzz right now i'd basically rather read this than read the actual book lol
wow thats really good sasha
I made my own clood promisce ending its on page 84 read please and tell me wat you think about so i can change it
Sade wrote: "I made my own clood promisce ending its on page 84 read please and tell me wat you think about so i can change it "urs was really good too sade =]
Sade wrote: "I made my own clood promisce ending its on page 84 read please and tell me wat you think about so i can change it "it was really good too
i dont think u have to change anything
its really good and u shouldn't change anything i felt like i was there experiencing it for myself and i hardly ever get that into a story! good job!!!:)
omg you guys! i love all of your writting! i wish i could write like that but if i tried to write right now it would turn into what just happend to me so that probably isnt a good idea!
wat happened????!!??
okay so lol i was at the mall with my friends and then these three guys come up to us and asks me what we were doing tonight and my friend answered just going home sorry. and then later on it clicked in my head that they have been following us and so then me and my other friend whent and asked them who they were talking too and the said me her and my other friend who answered them and then she asked what they were doing and they said just going to hang out there and if we wanted to stay with them and we said no sorry and he told me well text me sometime and my friend gave him her number
i hate it wen people follow ya around it scares me haha
yeah lol but now he is texting me! aaahhh
haha omg he is like four years older than me.
omg you guys i am like freaking out i swear i am going to stop texting him
sade, your writing was awsome. you don't have to change anything. and i'll try to write more, but as it gets longer it gets harder to write. i kind of wish richelle mead could see my writing so i could get her opinion too.
i know i'll try to add more details to the ending.
I'm rereading shadow kiss and i'm getting very anxious
this time i did cry
i cry everytime i read it!!!!!!!!!!:)
lolz it's was somehow sadder this time
maybe because the more u read it the more u get into it and fell like rose
so it made it sadder
plus u read all the
good parts and see how close they were getting and then he "dies"
and its like wtf come on y u gotta do that
I know the first time i read it i was like wth
that ending was kind of cruel, but it set the next book up perfecty. richelle was planning this the entire time
i know it was like so bad that he died that it made it good plus if he didnt die then there wouldnt of been 3 more books after shadow kiss
hey guys i came up with a little short (or on here very long) story of my own and i wanna know if you guys wanna here what i have so far, though it's not quite finished
i have a theory any one want go hear it
i wanna hear it..:D i like dimtri rose too (even though i prefer adrian:P)
omg i would love for mason to have lied and dimitri still b alive, but i dont think thats the case. i really dont care what happens as long as dimitri and rose live. i think it's be kind of dramatic if dimitri's just a prisoner and rose finds out her dad's a strigoi guard or whatever. it would satisfy my absolute need for chaos and drama. lol. anyway, dimka has to live, theres no butt-kickin rose without the hot Russian butt-kickin dimitri, i mean, am i right? with no dimitri, theres no good in the world. if dimka is a strigoi, i hope rose does kill him and then lissa swallows her tongue and doesnt argue when she needs to bring him back.i just hope the young, reckless 18 yr old doesnt become strigoi herself. it would be very sad for everyone. lissa, adrian, janine (her mom), and who knows, maybe even christian would cry (lol that'd be funny to read). i cant wait to read....18 MORE DAYS UNTIL BLOOD PROMISE IS RELEASED!!!!!!
Okay well I was reading shadow kiss and Adrian and rose were talking and Adrian said something like “well if you can feel her emotion and feels what she feel isn’t it possible you could catch her madness too” and that got me thinking what if rose and can somehow channel the magic to use it. She already can feel it. I bet if she works hard enough she can actually use the magic to heal dimitri herself.
Like healing Dimitri herself? That would be awesome Perla! Great theory.
this is my story tell me what u thinkI was sitting in the nightingale watching two moroi men a little older than me talk. I figured they were around three years older than me, and they could be able to help me. I hit a major stroke of luck, cause just then, one of them looked at his watch, got up and left. I stood up and approached the other man when he sat at the bar.
"hello" i said in a polite tone. "do you speak english?"
"yes" the man answered in a very heavy accent "my name is Duscha, Duscha Droven. What is yours?"
he had a playfull smile on his face, but something in his dark green eyes told me not to trust him. In a flirty voice i said "Sydney Ashford."
"it's nice to meet you Sydney, very,very, nice to meet you" he said as his eyes drifted down to my exposed legs. "how can i help you?"
"i'm looking for a town where the dhampirs live in Siberia. do you know where that is?" I felt bad hitting on a total stranger with glossy black hair, but it was the only way to get my answers.
"that depends," he said
i could tell by the way he said that he was buying into my act. "depends on what?"
"will you let me buy you a drink?" he asked
I debated wether or not i should say yes, but after a moment i said "sure,one only, but you should know im not old enough to drink, so something small"
"fine by me, i'll be right back."
he came back with two drinks and we talked for a few minutes. finally i said "now about that town of dhampirs..."
"alright, alright i'll right it all down and draw you a map," and thats exactly what he did. when he was done i said "thanks but i have to go now." i tried to stand up but he stopped me. "here, take my number in case you ever wanna hang out." he handed me a peice of paper with seven digits on it.
"thanks, but i really have to go, goodbye." and without another word i walked toward the door, On my way out i threw his number in the trash, and caught sight of the blood whore i talked to before watching me. i smiled at her and left.
i checked out of my hotel when i woke up and followed Duscha's instructions he wrote down. I finally arrived at the town around five o'clock in the afternoon. One of the two women washing clothing in a stream noticed me and tapped on her friend's shoulder.
"hello" i said "i'm looking for a man named Dimitri Belikov, do you know him?"
the one who noticed me answered "the Belikovs live right that way" as she pointed up hill. "just keep to the stream and you'll get to the village in a few minutes."
"thank you" i said to her. i headed up stream untill i was almost to the village, cause i started feeling nauseas. there was a few huts and shacks that made the front of the village next to a mini moutain that was too big to be a hill where the water ran down hill. I could tell that around the corner of the mountain not facing the village there was a strigoi, so i turned the corner holding my steak in one hand.
i wasn't at all prepared for what i found though. i dropped the steak and gasped when i saw his face. his hair was pulled into a ponytail and he was wearind the same clohting he wore when we attacked the caves. there he was, Dimitri, my Dimitri, a strigoi, right in front of me, sitting on a boulder with the saddest expression i had ever seen on him
"Roza, you came" he said and i burst out in tears. he started walking toward me, but stopped when i backed away. "i won't hurt you Roza, i promise." he started wlaking toward me agian and this time i didn't back up. when he got to me he wrapped his arms around me and pulled me into a kiss. "i've missed you Roza. i've missed you so, so much."
i've missed you too Dimitri." i told him.
"i love you Roza. i really, really love you with all my heart."
"i love you too, and thats why i'm here to save you." i told him
"how could you do that?" he asked me.
"i have to go to the wprld pf the dead and retrieve your soul after i kill you, then i have to make it back to my body and attach your soul back to you all in less than an hour or we both die." i answered
"i cant ask you to do that Rose. you might hurt yourself and i cant let that happen."
"i've been practicing, so i know what im doing." i told him "besides, you dont have to ask, i'll do it anyway."
after a minute of thinking he finally said "fine, you can go through with this, just please be careful."
"i will, i promise you i will" and then he leaned down to kiss me agian.
its not finished yet, but i can put the rest up tomarrow if you want.
omg i loved it! haha i am at my aunties house. and you should put up the rest it is so good. are you like Meads secrect asistant or something? haha lol its really good:D
PERLA!!! awesome dude. loved it. is that in your writings??
OH MY GOSH ! oh my gosh ! http://www.richellemead.com/excerpt/e...first chapter of the book!!! hahahahah my so excited :D
It sounds so good :)but i think the blond strigoi does play a big part in the the book ... i think that Rose will try and find Dimitri, but ends up finding the blond strigoi
she gets caught , but then Lissa can see through her bond that Rose is caught and comes to save her ... along with Christian, and Adrian ..... but then she meets Dimitri ... and will think about turning strigoi but then Lissa .. resuces her in time ... and like Sasha said ... Rose WILL turn Dimitri back into dhampir and they live happly ever after :)
16 days left till the book is out and we will know then :D !!!!1
i'll put somemore up later, cause i just moved into a new house and i have to help my parents clean =[ i moved from my friends and now they make me clean! ughhh i dont wanna ttyl guys
Brittnie i don't get what u said about if it's in my writing
haha man i loved it!
haha lol i think so
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The sun was just starting to rise. They seemed to relax and then what Lissa said finally caught up with them.
“wait you said rose healed him?" said Alberta.
"Yes," Lissa replied.
Alberta looked at me now with wonder in her eyes.
"How," was all she said?
I gave the best answer I could.
"I don't know. Maybe the same way that I can since when strigoi are near. I’m shadow kissed."
They all stared at me until someone spoke up to get us inside. The next few days were strange. Dimitri hardly ever left my side so it became obvious to everyone how we felt about each other. Which needless to say caused some major gossip. Though nobody dared to come near us because I was never alone. Lissa, Christian, and Adrian always stuck with me, and some people seemed to be afraid of me and Dimitri. I already had a reputation as a kick ass fighter, but when everyone herd I had changed a strigoi back into a dhampir, well, no one bother teasing me to my face.