Blood Promise
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Dimitri and Rose.
anyone want to swap bebo
msn
addys?
one of my more wacky ideas involves rose being pregnant with dimitri's baby when she finds his. i can write it quick if you guys want
im on face book kristy
and yes i wish i was taller to. i mean im 13 almost 14 and im only 5ft 1/2in
turning 14 in December =) I feel so old lol
ok, sounds good- i think we are all up for some fan fic :Di wrote a short story (6 a4 pages lol) about me and my friends when we are older and when i showed them they were peeing themselves especially my friend ewan cause i was married to rob pattinson (H)8) xx
kristy do you want my email so i can talk with you on face book
i think im the youngest on here same thing at school my best freind in the whole world is like in 9th grade im going to 7th in turning 13 in sep.
your 6 in the fist and your either 17 or 18 when you graduate depends what month ur born in
Sonya wrote: "great Joan! :D ill be at the post office every day!wat kind of books do u write?
and rose said she felt short compared to the moroi who are so tall and den she said she was 5.7! im only 5.3..."
i write sci-fi, romance, stuff like that. hold up one sec i'm going to write a part in my vamp novel
Sonya wrote: "accepted u kirsty... u like u sum Robert Pattenson :D wat happened to ur bebo Sade?? "
i 4got my password
hey in just in case you read it and it says Teala it's actualy Olivia. name changes...ugh
i do a little writting but there like 'what ifs' and their on my profiles there really good
there he was. not ten feet in front of me. i didn't expect him to look so glad to see me. he stared to walk towards me and i stared to take a step back and he stopped."Roza" he said.
" I love you. i'm not going to hurt you,roza."
something in the way he said that, and the look in his eyes made me believe him. i nodded and took a step forward and he was right in front of me in a few seconds. he startled me a bit and seemed to relize it.
"Sorry." said dimitri.
i raised my hand and put it on his cheak. he kissed me once very lightly and said," i love you," again.
" there's somthing i have to tell you," i said.
"what is it?" he replied.
i was sure he wouldnt but i had to ask.
"do you promise you won't hurt me?" i asked.
"yes of course roza," dimitri replied.
i nodded and said," all right. give me your hand."
he didn't look nervous, but was not quite sure what i was going to do. which is understandable considering what i was about to tell him was so impossible. i took his hand and placed it on my stomic. he just stared at his hand on my stomic until his head shot up in surprise. because he new i loved only him he started to understand what i was telling him. but he asked any way.
" is it mine?" he asked.
I smiled and nodded and he smiled too.
yes h is still strigoi but he is different than most
Sonya wrote: "ooohhh bummer! well try to remember and then we can all be friends :D and Joan that was great seriously! have u writtin a blurb? u cud put it on wattpad to c wat other ppl thought....?..."
on my page i have the first Chapter. its not THAT great it still needs a lot of work.
there is one part in my book were this guy nearly Rapes her but she's a Dhampir and doesn't realize it till she imprint's on this Vamp.
do you guys want me to post the offical blood promise fist chapter?
my story comes from ideas from twilight, house of night, and VA
me YA, compared to VA it sucks
i havent read it is it good
HON kinda sounds like zoey is pretending that all this crap is happening to her.
HON is like a bad verion of VA.
joan add me i want to read your writing
no offence to those that like HON
what did you guys think of the part in shadow kiss where rose is taking down the three guadians posing as strigoi and she finally takes down dimitri.
i have only read VA so i'll take ur word on it
i love the part when she takes down dimitri i was like finally and the gaze stare down i was like OMG they are totally in love w/. eachother no reason to hide it.
i loved it so much!!! my heart was ponding i just wanted to scan through it Sashaya the Emements were pretty dumb.
the way hey looked at her!!!! the tenchens!!!
sonya, you gave me a bloody heart attack, still recoveringand
sasha my facebook is kirsty.paton@tiscali.co.uk
im going to bed now so il catch up tomorrow
catchhhhhh yeez all laterrr xxx
wow its like 5:30pm here
you still here joan
sasha do u hav anymore short stories bout blood promise???? i wanna hear them really baddlydid anyone here read my sister's crazy theory on page 69??
not many. the rest are hard to write
i have to go soon so i cant write any more to night but i'll be back on around noon tomorrow. here is what i wrote today in case someone wants to read it.There he was. Not ten feet in front of me. I didn't expect him to look so glad to see me. He stared to walk towards me and I stared to take a step back and he stopped.
"Roza" he said.
“I love you. I’m not going to hurt you, Roza."
Something in the way he said that, and the look in his eyes made me believe him. I
nodded and took a step forward and he was right in front of me in a few seconds. He startled me a bit and seemed to realize it.
"Sorry." said Dimitri.
I raised my hand and put it on his cheek. he kissed me once very lightly and said," I love you," again.
“There’s something I have to tell you," I said.
"What is it?" he replied.
I was sure he wouldn’t but I had to ask.
"Do you promise you won't hurt me?" I asked.
"Yes of course roza," Dimitri replied.
I nodded and said," all right. Give me your hand."
he didn't look nervous, but was not quite sure what I was going to do. Which is understandable considering what I was about to tell him was so impossible. I took his hand and placed it on my stomach. He just stared at his hand on my stomach until his head shot up in surprise. Because he new I loved only him he started to understand what I was telling him. But he asked any way.
“Is it mine?" he asked.
I smiled and nodded and he smiled too.
I realized no matter how wrong it was, I couldn't kill him. I felt something like when lissa was going to heal something but a little darker. I didn't know what I was doing considering I was in the middle of a fight, but I reach out and touched Dimitri. All of a sudden, his red eyes turned back to their normal dark color. His skin darkened and I could feel his heart beat under my had. I realized somehow I just turned him back into a dhampir. We were still in the middle of a fight but now I was fighting with Dimitri instead of against him. And unfortunately, also like Lissa I felt weaker. I just managed to keep myself from going unconscious. When the fight was over I looked at my friends and Dimitri. Lissa, Adrian, and Christian just realized that Dimitri looked like himself. It looked like Lissa was about to ask me something but I collapsed. I woke up on a plane in Dimitri’s arms. He was holding me like when I had broken my ankle. all he said was," I love you, Roza." but that was all it took. I don't know how long I cried but we ended up back at the academy only an hour after I stopped.
When we got back to the academy, they took all of us right to the hospital though Lissa and Adrian had healed everyone. They took one look at Dimitri and me in his arms and it looked like they were about to rip me out of his arms until Lissa spoke up." He isn't what you think. He’s a dhampir again. rose healed." it still looked like they were about to do something to him so I said," Look he's in the Sun." the sun was just starting to rise. They seemed to relax and then what Lissa said finally caught up with them. “wait you said rose healed him?" said Alberta. "Yes," Lissa replied. Alberta looked at me now with wonder in her eyes. "How," was all she said? I gave the best answer I could. "I don't know. Maybe the same way that I can since when strigoi are near. I’m shadow kissed." they all stared at me until the someone spoke up to get us inside.
The next few days were strange. Dimitri hardly ever left my side so it became obvious to everyone how we felt about each other. Which needless to say caused some major gossip. Though nobody dared to come near us because I was never alone. Lissa, Christian, and Adrian always stuck with me, and some people seemed to be afraid of me and Dimitri. I already had a reputation as a kick ass fighter, but when everyone herd I had changed a strigoi back into a dhampir, well, no one bother teasing me to my face.
Omg you guys i was gone for like what a total of one hour and you already finished about two pages! and i like all of yiour guy's writting! its amazing :D
sasha you are like my hero! although, how did Rose get prego? but if she was that is how the story should go!
i need that book i'll go insane if i don't get it in 2 weeks!
i know me too! ah! i hate logging off cuz then like i miss so much then i have to go back and catch up. but i have soccer practice twice a day then i have to go with my bf so its tiring!
apperently i missed some things to rose. a lot of people logged off 2 hours ago for bed. i have no idea where they live but its only 8:19pm here. i'll be back on and off tonight until i catch u on and i'll try to think of some more theories.
It's 8:35 here in Miami Florida. Good God, I can't stand waiting, I'm really impatient and I have to wait like 18 more days. Thank God we have this post to read and stuff. 8)
i know it is taking forever to come out
so i just write what i want to happen. apperently people like them
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