Blood Promise
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Dimitri and Rose.
oh wait, nvm ifthe blonde strigoi was an alternate ending for her story, nvm about me saying he wasn't. But in the book he wasn't
Dee wrote: "Jessica wrote: "Uh, can Strigoi become Shadowkissed?I didn't read anywhere in the book where it said they couldn't or could.But that would be cool.
Uhm Mason didn't stay because he completed his..."
Yeah, she did,didn't she?
I guess we'll find out sooner or later.
Haha.
I wonder if Lissa will stop using her magic stuff to save Rose from going crazy like Anna?Did Rose tell Lissa about that before she left?
I guess I'll have to re-read it and see...
no she didn't tell lissa she wants to protect her. if you ask me if lissa wasn't being so sselfish than she would have already known this and that rose was in love with dimitri.
Judy wrote: "Brittnie i just read her alternate ending i loved it but in the beginning it says that the blond strigoi is a guardian who got turned strigoi.... is that true or are you just making it up to make i..."I just made that up. none of it is fact. I was just coming up with stuff. =] thanks tho.
thanks for your guys' interest. I abesolutely love this forum! You guys are awesome. and the email is reppndadyt10@aol.com =] just email me or post your email on here and I'll send it to you =]
so far so good, but woahh brit:We didn't do it on the bed the whole time. He picked me up and sat on the chair. This was his subtle way of giving me the wheel I guess. I didn't know much about this, but I wasn't the type to back down. So I gave it my all, and from judging his moans, I'd done a hell of a job.
yer i hope that dimitri isn't dead forever or a strogi or whateva, but i think taht this book will be about rose's journey(seeing as the cover only has a girl on it, no boys or anything) copying without lissa and the grief of losing her love. it would interesting seeing rose outside the walls of the academy again and maybe it would be awesome if she went as saw dimitri's family, like get backgorund on him and might help her find him and kill him. it would aslo be interesting if she falls pregnant because dhampirs and dhampirs can't creat a baby because i no a dhampir is created by a dhampir and a moroi or moroi and humans. but like it would be a miricle or somthing. i do like the idea that rose could go back to the land of the dead like victor said and maybe get back dimitri's soul!!!! i think that when she comes to face him it will be difficult, but i have a feeling that maybe she won't finish him off in this book seeing as there are like meant to be 6 in the series.
good job, Brittnie,veryy cutee, but too good to be troo...i loved it tho!!
i think the blond hair strogi can be a old teacher
Brittnie your alternate ending was great!
hey brittnie is was sooo cute haha..hey i was thinkin of the new person and it could be someone dimitri new like his sister or something and they could help rose find dimitri or something i dunnno it just a thought haha
i dont think the character is a big role mead said on her blog she wanted to add a new side character maybe more like a supporting like what Eddie is.
ok i think that this new person will most likely be Eddie's love intrist
like i sed.. it could be anyone.. maybe christian has a sister we dont know about. i think i sed something about mason's sister Alex. I thinks thats her name??Hes supposed to have a sister that comes into it??ummm maybe the new character's just a random kid who also is a spirit user... who noess. i hate to say this, but we have to wait till august...unfortunatelyy =(
so does anyone wanna read chapter 1 of my version of blood promise??? ive been working really hard on it for you guys and the dimitri belikov lovers group has been pushing me and promoting me.. if anyone wants to read it just say so and ill put it up in a comment.. kk just comment this board and ill post chapter 1. im working on chapter 12 right now
yea i'll read it kriss:) im up for any thing that invloves dimitri haha.. i agree wid u kriss that it could be anyone haha apart from mead who knows..
Well here's chapter one, im almost finished with chapter 12.. As my story continues, you meet new characters, I don't wanna put the whole thing up..its long...soo Here's Chapter 1:
CHAPTER1:It had been about two and half weeks since I left St. Vladimir's Academy. I had hurt Lissa so bad when I left and I didn't think she would ever forgive me. And at that moment, I got a text from Adrian Ivashkov, a royal Moroi who was madly in love with me. It read:
Hey Little Dhampir, I just wanted to tell you we all miss you. You could've figured that out already, though. I thought I should tell you how much I love you. You know, just in case you get hurt. If you need anything like cash, sex or a driver, you just give me a holler.
Wow! That was nice of Adrian to say considering that he was never really on board with my withdrawal from St. Vladimir’s. I decided to write back:
Thank you so much Adrian, for everything. I owe you big time.
Before I could cancel the text, it sent. I had said I owed him. Now I might have to do him a favor, and knowing Adrian, he'll want me to come back. Uhh Oh! I thought. I immediately received a text reply from Adrian; he wrote back exactly what I expected:
Consider me paid back if you come home, Rose. Everyone knows about you and Belikov.
I gasped at the last line. I knew he was going to turn it around on me. Instead of receiving a text, Adrian called me.
“Little Dhampir, you have had me worried sick,” Adrian sighed, " I thought you've been dead.”
“Gee...thanks, Adrian! You have such a positive outlook on the situation, huh?” I replied sarcastically.
“Rose, I miss you. Plus...I have got something about Belikov you might want to know even though-”
“What about Dimitri?” I blurted out.
“I refuse to tell you unless you come home to us,” Adrian declared.
“I'll have sex with you,” I said hoping to fool him.
“How would that happen if you don't come back to St. Vladimir’s?” Adrian asked
“Please Adrian,” I begged.
“I will tell and SHOW you if you come back. You have my word. I promise, Little Dhampir...I promise,” he said in the most believable way.
“I'll see you tomorrow night, Adrian. Goodbye.”
“Rose, wait!” Adrian added before I could hang up.
“What time are you waking up tomorrow?”
“I'm setting my alarm for 5:30 A.M.,” I informed Adrian.
“Okay,” he sighed.
I guess I'm going to visit school tomorrow, I thought.
“Better pack the few things I got,” I mumbled to myself aloud.
I packed up the few belongings I had taken with me and changed in to my night-shirt. I had a long drive ahead of me. I brushed my teeth and pulled my hair into a ponytail, the ponytail Dimitri loved to see me in oh so much. I sighed at the thought of Dimitri. “Soon my love, soon,” I quietly spoke. I set my alarm for 5:30 A.M. and climbed under the warm covers of the hotel's bed. I propped my head on a pillow as if it was Dimitri’s chest. I inhaled deeply after a few minutes of having my eyes closed. I had managed to make myself think the pillow was Dimitri. The pillow did not smell like Dimitri.
Tears fell from my eyes as I stared up at the ceiling. I cried myself to sleep that night, thinking about nothing accept the fact that Adrian had either something very important or something meaningless to tell me the next day. All I could do that night was hope that Adrian was going to tell me Dimitri's issues are solve and maybe something better... The something better was highly unlikely.
At 11:30 P.M., I drifted off to sleep. St. Vladimir's was running on a day schedule since the attack so I would get to the school just before nightfall and just before the good students would go to sleep.
omg i want to know wot happens next haha.. its really good:)
thanks. still working on chapter 12.. lmaoo. new characterr againn. theres like 3 new characters so far.
when the fanfic site emails me back my verification, ill put the story i have so far up and give you all the link, but its been more than 9 hrs and i still havent gotten my verification and im getting impatient.
haha kk it is really good:).. hey every one else seems to be on this wen im asleep haha we must be in the same time zones haha
omg that is awesome kirss ur such a good writer, and i like the ideas that are comming, can't wait to read more
I so loved that! your a great writer! awesome awesome awesome!!
Wow, that was great!I'd love to read more =]
im really starting to hate this fan fic websitefanfic.net sux and is pissing me off!!!
everyone saying im a good writer, i wish you could tell my english teacher that..lmao..every writing assignment 75(just enough to pass) or 74(enough to fail) lmaoo.. but i get rewrites and get an 84 or 85..so im still passing lol
i gess she doesnt like me...lol she grades like we're in college even though were like not
Do you think you'll post chapter two on here or if not could you send me what you have written, if i give you my email. Do you have msn??
no i dnt have msn...soon the stupid ass fanfic.net will give me my verification and i can put it up.. till then gonna continue writing and waiting for that email and postinf some comments on here.
i could give yas the 1st paragraph of chapter 2.. i dont wanna flow up the the whole page. well here it's:I woke up at 5:30 A.M. as I planned and took a shower, brushed my teeth and dressed in a black sweat suit Dimitri had left for me when he was pronounced dead. It smelt of him, so it was his. It was very big on me, but it made me feel connected to Dimitri very much.
oh come on, you can't just stop there? cant you post atleast chapters two and three we have to wait and till august for blood promise to come out, what are we goona do while we wait?...... i know we can read what you have written. *Grins evilly*
oh come on, you can't just stop there? cant you post atleast chapters two and three we have to wait and till august for blood promise to come out, what are we goona do while we wait?...... i know we can read what you have written. *Grins evilly*
okay just click blood promise at the top to view all the topics its called my fan fic---for all who ask or something like that, ill post it in there...okay?
but still come in here, everyone.. this topics awesome we have put together some reellie great ideas
um, where am i supposed to be clicking
Kyra wrote: "thanks"no probbzz
Will you put up the next chapter soon..or like now, lol no hurry, well thats a lie actually
Kyra wrote: "Will you put up the next chapter soon..or like now, lol no hurry, well thats a lie actually "i put it up
would i be asking to much if i asked for the fourth chapter, please
Kyra wrote: "would i be asking to much if i asked for the fourth chapter, please"iim gonna run out of chapters soon. im working on 13 as wee speak
so, is that a no, cause you offically have me hooked! i mean you could put up ten chapters and thats it, i think that is very reasonable.
Kyra wrote: "so, is that a no, cause you offically have me hooked! i mean you could put up ten chapters and thats it, i think that is very reasonable."
up to chapter 6 is up..okay??? lol
just go to my profile and somewhere on it it should say writing and up to chapter 6 is in there
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But he did know lissa and rose before he was 'awakened' as a strigoi.
But I think he's going to take place in blood promise.
I was thinking yesterday about the fortunes.
Roses was : you will destroy that which is undead.
Since dimitri is now strigoi, or so we think. Don't you think she will destory what has become of him -not kill- but destroy. It could be a good thing.
And there's some talk about a new spirit user, if there is. Don't you think there going to put that to good use around the dimitri situation. And the blonde strigoi, he also bit dimitri and while he did it he glanced back up at rose. I think the strigois are trying to do everything at once. He wants lissa the last dragomir dead, and he knew something about rose and dimitri obviously, I think he went to the source of it - dimitri- to get rose to look for him and obviously lissa will eventually follow. It's just a thought. Prolly no good