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Dimitri and Rose.
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Aug 18, 2009 04:01PM
heyy peoples umm im back so fill me in wats happeneing?
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OMG KELLYANN IVE BEEN GONE FOREVER TOO!!!!!! ALL OF YOU LIKE HAVE TO FILL ME IN BUT LIKE I HAVE A GAME SO ILL GET ON AFTER AROUND 9!!! THIS TIME I PROMISE I WILL!!!!!!!
oh, tasha this Would be my verion of what happens if Bella knew rose and lissa.I looked to the east. Something was coming this way. And fast. I turned to Renesmee and pulled her behind me. Edward picked up on how uncomfortable I was and flew to my side.
“What’s wrong Bella?”
“Do you smell that?”
“Ya, I think that it’s just Esme or Jasper.”
“No. That’s not them. It’s….familiar. I’ve smelled it before, but it’s a bigger whiff.”
“Well it’s not a Human,” Edward said while taking a sniff of the air, “but it’s not an Animal. It doesn’t smell like a Werewolf, or Vampire that I’ve ever met.” Suddenly four images were walking out of the shadows.
“No, it can’t be.” I whispered.
“Bella wh-”
“Rose? Lissa?” I asked questionably. All four of them stopped walking and my Vampire hearing picked up what they were saying.
“Did she just say your name? Have you ever met her before?” A man said. To the other side another Man began to speak.
“I don’t trust them, Rose. Don’t go over there.”
“Don’t worry. I took care of myself when I was searching for you...,”then she looked in his eyes, “But knowing that your hear makes me positive that nothing will happen.” She stepped forward and he grabbed her arm. She gently shook it off.
“Isabella?”
“Rose I new it was you!” I said while running up to her. Suddenly, the man that was talking to Rose ran forward and jerked her backwards from my embrace. Edward lunged forward and pushed me behind him. He let out a low snarl. The Man there just stood there calm and collected. Renesmee was quietly sobbing so I picked her up.
woww that ones really good!
i'm writing more right now. i got the idea to right about it from Tasha though. she was the one who started righting it first.
you should start to write Your own stories with your own characters, they would be good .... i think u just need a little push to get going with a series but pritty much all the hard stuff is done for you so you should try to write your own book :)
wow that was really good joanit would be awesome if u and tasha worked on it together
yeah they're right
wow i havebeen gone soooooo long that was really good joan i hate my writing
is anybody on here?
yes sorry got distracted
haha now im on all alone
nope im still here
oh haha okay cuz i thought i was alone
wow i am sooo pumped i am liking school so what r we going to talk about today???
so um are we going to write about va mix twilight or what
this is a continuation of joans if thats ok i am a super slow typer
haha your good. and i want to continue Tasha's from like page 120 or something when they are desiding names
oh yeah wasnt ur turn
haha hey pandy? Do you mind if i call you Pandy-O?
Lol you know like Cherios? haha sorry im hyper right now! my team won and it was Mayfield vs. Cruces and we kicked their buts!
haha okay so here it goes give me a couple of minutes lol
heyummm.lol.i guess.idc>.<
congrats on the win
"Oh its ok Dimitri I know her." Rose said enthusem in her voice. "I still dont trust her." Dimitri said.Edward let out a low snarl beside me. Then I heard the wolves coming.
Rose looked behind them she griped something in her pocket. So did Dimitri the man next to Lissa stiffened.
The wolves came into veiw. Rose lunged so did Alice and Edward. Rose was restrained by Alice Edward was holding Dimitri's hands behind his back.
Lissa was looking into Alices eyes and Alice released Rose. Then Lissa did something to Edward and he let go.
"What is Lissa doing?" I asked couris. "Sorry, I was using compulsion to let them go." Lissa said embaresed.
Rose Pulled something silver out and i stated to babble.
"Well they are werewolves they are our friends so there is no need for violence."
"Shut up Bella for a sec hang on." Rose said nervos about something.
Then I heard something else. " Whats going on?" i asked.
"Strigoi." Rose and Dimitri said at the same time
I gasped "What?"
Rose looked behind them she griped something in her pocket. So did Dimitri the man next to Lissa stiffened.
The wolves came into veiw. Rose lunged so did Alice and Edward. Rose was restrained by Alice Edward was holding Dimitri's hands behind his back.
Lissa was looking into Alices eyes and Alice released Rose. Then Lissa did something to Edward and he let go.
"What is Lissa doing?" I asked couris. "Sorry, I was using compulsion to let them go." Lissa said embaresed.
Rose Pulled something silver out and i stated to babble.
"Well they are werewolves they are our friends so there is no need for violence."
"Shut up Bella for a sec hang on." Rose said nervos about something.
Then I heard something else. " Whats going on?" i asked.
"Strigoi." Rose and Dimitri said at the same time
I gasped "What?"
oh sorry rose i didnt know oops i will delete it if you want
“What if it’s a girl?” Christian asked. “I was thinking Melanie.”
“Have you thought of which last name you’re going to use?” Lissa asked.
“Umm, actually, we hadn't really discussed that yet, I mean we're not like married but I was thinking Belikov…” I said.
Dimitri smiled at that.
“Mason Belikov or Melanie Belikov, I like it.” Lissa said with a thoughtful look on her face.
"I do to but its not for sure though thats just all we have came up with so far. We still have a while to think." I said with a sigh. Names are really the last thing I have to worry about.
"True. Hey Christian and I were going to see if we could get off campus to go and eat some where nice. You guys want to come? It would be great if you could" Lissa asked.
"I dont know Lissa. Its not really safe right now. Maybe it is here at the Academy. But outside of the wards its risky. Especially sense I cant do much any more. But when were you planning to go. Maybe we could try." I said hessitently
"Yay! We plan to go this saturday. But we can go whenever your free! Or whenever your not sleeping." She said sarcasticly. As I turned to Dimitri to see what he thought about going, I saw him and Christian and Adrian all whispering together. Adrian cleared his throat. Finally they stopped whispering.
"Is there something wrong?" I asked in my old bitchy voice. Man I havent talked like that in forever. But it bugged the hell out of me that they would whisper right infront of Lissa and I.
haha lol thanks i can keep going cuz i have a purpose to what they were whispering about lol cuz then it leads to this big thing
plz write plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz
haha lol okay give me a while
that was great lissa/ rose
ha ha lol thx but MINE sucked i am a horrible writer
no it didnt and no ur not i thought was really good
ok thx u r awesome too y dont u write next
because I actually suck at it
yay! im at the top=D
"Is there something wrong?" I asked in my old bitchy voice. Man I havent talked like that in forever. But it bugged the hell out of me that they would whisper right infront of Lissa and I. "No nothing is wrong. Why would you think that?" Christian answered with the perfect poker face that deffinitly did not work on me.
"Because its not every day that I see you and Adrian and Dimitri all talking with out some body being mad at some one!" I snapped back at him. Wow my mood swings were getting bad.
"Roza, calm down. I think we should go now you look kinda pale."
I hate it when he always guessed what I was thinking or what was wrong with me. Well no I didnt but right now I did. Although I did feel kinda dizzy.
"Okay, but only cuz I feel like crap. I'm gonna go. Bye Lissa, Christian. Bye Adrian." I said as I gave them all quick hugs goodbye.
"Bye Little Damphir." Adrian said as I was out the door. I could bearly hear him. The good thing was Dimitri couldn't because he was ahead of me. I still think Adrian loves me. I probably broke his heart by not giving him a fair chance like I said I would. Dimitri never found out about that. Ofcourse I did tell him that without Adrian I would have never found him. But thats about all I told him. "Hey what were you guys talking about in there? And dont even think about telling me nothing."
haha im sure your not bad! nobody is on here most good readers are good writers too!
no im pretty bad=D
haha okay whatever you say! andOMG!!!!! I WAS TEXTING ONE OF MY GUY FRIENDS AND HE SAID HE'S NOT GOING TO MY SCHOOL ANY MORE AND I SAID FINE JUST LEAVE ME AND HE SAID WELL DO YOU WANT ME TO TAKE YOU WITH ME AND I SAID OF COURSE AND HE WAS ALL OKAY ILL CARRY YOU THEIR AND I SAID HE BETTER!!!!! AND HE WAS ALL OKAY LOL
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