Blood Promise
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Dimitri and Rose.
that was great i read some of it awhile bak but woww its great.. ur a good writer.
thanks hopfully i don't have to post the whole thing again. i did it this time because i changed it up a bit
yeah i noticed its really good.. better than mine. i would post it. but my nephew ripped it up lol he's only one doesn.t know any better
do you think rose should tell eddie or no?
you have a nephew how old are you
14 but my older sis is 25
ok.im 14. im the oldest in my family
omg that was o-mazing! does eddie guess or something? i want to know cuz at the moment i want to read this more then the actual book! lol
how bout this for ur story..."yeah preety much. wait when did you get bak.? i heard u were bak but u havn.t gone to any classes. so i thought is wasnt true." eddie said "well its true. i am bak just not a student." i said smiling. i hadnt seen eddie in almost forever it seemed to me. "so... is it true that u brought bak Guardian Belikov?" i nodded. "wait you seem different to me. u uhhh..." he didnt finish. i knew wat he was going to say but he didnt say it. "put on some weight. yeah. i'll explain when the time is right." he nodded "okay. wait were is Guardian Belikov?" "cabin. look i really got to go and talk to lissa. so i'll talk to you soon." "okay bye" "bye" i called over my shoulder heading for lissa's room.
thats wat i got.
wow that was really good tasha
im the middle child. so i bby sit sometimes
tht was good too cassi but wouldnt he -especially bc hes all protecttive of her-wonder why her and dimitri are living together? lol jw
yeah i forgot about that lol. but maybe he thinks she lives somewhere else. idk i'll have to think more about it lol.
this is what i just wrote.“Seems like it. Seems like you know them better then the rest of us anyway.”
“Just Dimitri really.”
I regretted it as soon as I said it. I didn’t know what he would make of it.
“So what’s changed?” he asked
“You really can’t tell?”
I only asked that because it was getting more obvious. It had only been a month since we got back, but still. He looked me over and got it. His eyes stopped on my stomach. He looked back up at me and just stared bug eyed. To me he looked a like a idiot, but his shock was understandable.
“Well say something.” I urged.
“I didn’t think you liked Adrian.”
“Adrian. You think he’s the father?”
“Well, not anymore. But if he isn’t who is?”
Right then to my convenience, Dimitri walked up. I didn’t think he was going to come tonight.
“Hey, what are you doing here? I didn’t think you where coming tonight?” I asked.
“Lissa called me asking where you were. I told her you left a little while ago but she said you weren’t there. So I told her I’d go look for you.”
“You two really don’t need to worry about me so much. I just ran into Eddie.”
“Literally” Eddie added.
Dimitri laughed quietly.
“Go and tell Lissa I’ll be there in a few minutes.” I told him.
“Alright.” He said with some laughter still in his voice. He kissed my forehead and headed off. When he was out of sight I turned back to Eddie. He looked a little shocked.
“Does that answer your question?”
that is good cassi. i wish i read it sooner, i took me a half an hour to come up with a couple paragraphs.
lol i like urs too especially the part were eddies eyes bug out i can litterly imagine all that happening. lol
hey, thats better than anythin i can come up with lol
thanks. i try to get meads style of writing to make the story more believe able. oh here i just finished th rest:“Him?”
“Yes. Look, please don’t tell anyone. Alberta is the only other person that I’ve told. I don’t want the whole school to know.”
“You know me better then that. Of course I won’t tell any one.”
“Thanks. I’ve got to go before he comes looking for me again.”
We hugged again and said goodbye
hey when alexandra said the song "bring me to life" summed up blood promise pretty well i listened to it five times and had to google it to see the lyrics before i really got it. here's a link. listen to it and tell me what you think.http://video.google.com/videosearch?h...#
this is wat i got. from where u left off tasha..'uhh. how. why. when.' was all eddie could say. i laughed 'think you know the how. why. well i love him and he loves me back. the when well before the attack a couple of months ago. remember.?' 'yeah. i still cant believe it. you and demitri.' 'wow u called him demitri. thats a first.' i laughed. 'look eddie.' i contiued. 'dont say anything to anyone. for now anyways.' i said rubbing my stomache he nodded. 'sure rose. anything for u. and i guess demitri too.' i smiled 'dont for get the bby. and thanks eddie.' i said walking to liss's room.
nice cassi. it's a little weird because i had a cruch on a kid in school last year and his name was Demitri.
thats was good tasha wish i could of read the last you post up. lol
dude you have a knack for these things.you were amazing
r u seriouse lol that is weird lol
Harley wrote: "dude you have a knack for these things.you were amazing"wait im confused who r u telling.. lol sorry
i dont know what else to put. i think i'll end it there but maybe i'll add more eventully
Tasha wrote: "what's weird"that u had a crush named demitri..
it's what i like to do. i see it in my head and type it the best i can. the newest one i'm working on is a little strange cause it has nothing to do with blood promise, but i got bored one night and i stared combinding breaking dawn and VA
Tasha wrote: "i dont know what else to put. i think i'll end it there but maybe i'll add more eventully"if you want i can add to it and post it. only if you want.
Tasha wrote: "it's what i like to do. i see it in my head and type it the best i can. the newest one i'm working on is a little strange cause it has nothing to do with blood promise, but i got bored one night an..."wow thats cool. sometimes when im bored i make up stories, lol
thanks harley but im letting cassi continue it
thanks lol
Harley wrote: "i was telling tasha."kay thanks for clearing that up
lol thanks harley.
yeah my idea was that the cullens weren't the first vampires she has ever met. the first immortal, but not the first in general. she was friends with rose lissa eddie and mason when they were kids.
g2g have dinner be back soon
kay..
where i left off.as i walked into lissa's room. she smiled. 'hey rose.' i smiled bak 'hey liss' i sat down on her bed next to demitri. 'how r u doing?' she asked rubbing my stomache i sighed 'tired. but other than that fine.'
thats all i got. so far. i'll right more soon, i got to go,, bye
good mind if i added it to mine?
omg you guys we should all take turns adding to it!!!!! lol only if you dont mind Tasha.
:D
lol yeah tht'd be so cool
sure im working on it right now
have you read the whole thing
Okay so after you post it then some one else will go and yeah. and if some one wants to re-do some ones then they could just say like alternate writting from whoever yeah?
ok here's what i have so far.We hugged again and said goodbye and I headed off to Lissa’s room. I opened myself up to her on the way to see if I worried her to much. I slid into her head briefly to see if Dimitri was there and he was I could feel she was fine now. I got to her room and when she opened the door she pulled me into a tight hug.
“I’m not that late Liss. I was just talking to Eddie.”
“Yeah I know. Dimitri said you ran into him on your way here.”
“Literally.” said Christian.
I glared at Dimitri.
“You didn’t have to add that part.”
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