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Ingrid, Just another writer.
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Sep 28, 2012 11:20AM

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Kyle wrote: "Thanks Ingrid, I just want an honest opinion. There's no way in hell I'm showing anybody I actually know, so opinions from strangers is probably the best option! :)
I want an honest opinion. If yo..."
i didn't get to read it but the fact that you put a lot of work into it is good enough. I will read it before 5 pm and tell you what i think:)
I want an honest opinion. If yo..."
i didn't get to read it but the fact that you put a lot of work into it is good enough. I will read it before 5 pm and tell you what i think:)

Anyway...regarding your story I am yet to read it...But can you put the story in one single sentence...
One of my friend's who is a good critic of stories...says a good story is one which can be condensed into a single sentence...
Do this only if you are okay about it...
I will surely read your story..ALL THE BEST!!