This question contains spoilers… (view spoiler)[Hi Clare, Like some other readers who reviewed your book, I became just a tad impatient with the first 160 pages (of Kindle edition). The investigation was going nowhere, and Jenna seemed to be treading water. Did you ever think of making the stakes a little higher by hinting at her real role in the book, and why she really did not want to be found right from the beginning? (hide spoiler)]