Hello Taran, awesome story that gets me on the edge of my seat and makes me inpatient for the next one. I have been writing aswell but 4 years ago I lost 248 pages of story because of a crash that also destroyed my backup usb. I have started to write again and was wondering, since I'm still a newbie I wonderd if you would like to read the story and give me tips on what I could do better, if you have the time ofcourse?