Sofia Martinez Same here, I ended up questioning the writing a lot of times. Also, a good aditor would have shortened the book.
Asteropê Curious which edition you read, the one published by Loveswept? Or the older one? I'd hope the Loveswept edition would have put it through a better editor, seeing as they're a professional publisher.
Maryellen Clair You picked it up next to Twilight, not Adventures of Huckleberry Finn. Just sayin....
Shruti Gupta Agreed..I personally liked the feel and characters of the book. But it was very evident that this whole series hasn't been edited properly. I would had enjoyed the book, but right now it seemed like a bit of drag. Shame so much potential. I keep hoping the series will become better with the next book ( The forever Optimistic that I am)!