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Goodreads asked James Newman:

What’s your advice for aspiring writers?

James Newman Think you're finished with that story or novel you've been working on?
Read it aloud. Then read it aloud again.

Chances are, it's not as ready to release into the world as you thought it was. I'd bet money on it, in fact. The best way to find (and get rid of!) clunky passages and flowery prose -- especially where good, realistic dialogue is concerned -- is to read your work aloud. More often than not, you'll realize the piece needs more work. Sure, it hurts when this hits you. But it's worth it in the long run.

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