There is a slight Diedre-inconsistency that is bugging me. My confusion stems from this. I recall in book 1, Diedre was given a more linient punishment which to me seemed like community service....you know,..cleaning up after the Leila mess but in book3, she has spent a year in a lead cell.i don't get it. did i get it wrong? or do i need to read the first book again?

Tina Folsom You're correct again. There is an inconsistency. It actually stems from several issues: I had initially planned to kill off Deirdre as punishment, but then wanted to change it in the editing process changed to the lesser sentence of the 1 year in the lead cell - and unfortunately that's how I remembered it. And of course, there are 5 years between me writing Lover Uncloaked and Warrior Unraveled, and therefore I also had a different editor for both books. So neither I nor she spotted the inconsistency. It happens, unfortunately. But I'll be rewriting the scene in Lover Uncloaked so that it fits with Warrior Unraveled just as soon as I have a couple of days to make the changes.
Many thanks again,
Tina

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