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This is what my first couple of chapters look like. I kinda feel like it’s a lot. If yall say it’s to much I’ll add that as a note to fix in editing later on.
❀ meet the main three and they are getting out of school for the summer
❀ phone call with main girl about a boy
❀ swimming with the main three
❀ water gun fight
❀ water gun fight continues
❀ water gun fight coninutes but comes to and end
the chapter after the last watergun fight chapter I am still not sure i’m keeping so yeah thats all thanks
❀ meet the main three and they are getting out of school for the summer
❀ phone call with main girl about a boy
❀ swimming with the main three
❀ water gun fight
❀ water gun fight continues
❀ water gun fight coninutes but comes to and end
the chapter after the last watergun fight chapter I am still not sure i’m keeping so yeah thats all thanks
it seems great but depends on how you write it
its ok but its it is kinda a lot
it seems fine
it sound perfect even though I haven’t read it.
wayyy to much sis
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Aug 31, 2025 02:18PM
Sounds great! I would recommend, however, to keep the water gun fight to one chapter, unless it’s a really important scene that should take up three chapters. That also depends on how long your chapters are, though. The average chapter is around 10 pages, and so I’d imagine you don’t need 20+ pages for one scene. But I could be wrong, especially if your chapters are more like three pages or so (mine used to be that way so there’s nothing wrong with short chapters—I actually prefer them!) I hope this helps! And good luck with writing!
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yea…I ca find it gets boring when more than one chapters are hyperfixtating on one thing
well like the first one is 9 then the other two water gun ones are 6 i might need to shorten it but idk
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