People who voted 'it seems fine ' on the poll: 'This is what my firs'

poll: This is what my first couple of chapters look like. I kinda feel like it’s a lot. If yall say it’s to much I’ll add that as a note to fix in editing later on.
❀ meet the main three and they are getting out of school for the summer
❀ phone call with main girl about a boy
❀ swimming with the main three
❀ water gun fight
❀ water gun fight continues
❀ water gun fight coninutes but comes to and end

the chapter after the last watergun fight chapter I am still not sure i’m keeping so yeah thats all thanks —> people who voted for: it seems fine

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