Yellowface
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The rhythm’s off. That imagery doesn’t work. Seriously? Another em dash?
Shad Sharma
lol. Em dash before it became an AI thing.
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A pair of lovers who are reincarnated century after century into the same iteration of their tragic story until they can find a way to break the cycle. (The premise is cool, but it’s too daunting to research so many different historical periods. I mean, what’s cute about the 1700s?)
Shad Sharma
Reminiscent of the barenaked ladies song. It’s all be done… before
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Truth be told, I’m intimidated by the work involved. Since I’ve already done all that research for The Last Front, Chinese-inspired stories seem a bit easier. I already know so much about the history, about the current political touchpoints involved. I already speak the critical vocabulary; all I need is a hook.
Shad Sharma
This is also why the wife and I keep playing tango. It’s not that we don’t want to do other stuff; it’s just that that’s the vocabulary of our music these days.