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October 10 - October 13, 2019
Tattered fabric stretched across rolls of exposed blubber.
Because fat people are disgusting. Got you.
visitor wearing tattered garments.
wearing
Nifan considered herself a socialite as much as a politician.
Is "debutant" really the word you want here? Especially in the male form?
Sensing weakness, Nifan allowed a sly smirk
Dangler
why oh why, did you
Excess comma
Before they reached the airlock, a Ripper ship
Dangler
racing towards them.
the green energy barrier that had saved their hides
had
what it had done to deserve such hostility,
had done
facing the wall. His tiny
Dangler
Madam Nifan.
Master Halim.”
Madam Nifan.
Why doesn't she get a capital for her title? He does.
Perra’s hand, who returned a loving smile.
Dangler-like thing
still wore his pink tutu
wearing
was
as if the room had donned a pair of sunglasses.
This is the correct usage of "don"!
I never
His parents are certainly defined only by their absence.
she wore a clean set of punky attire,
wore
Twice as many commas as it needs
