Savage Vow (Ivanov Crime Family #1)

by Zoe Blake

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Spacing issue

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My slight frame was not enough to budge him.

Hahahaha she thinks highly of herself “slight frame”

dark hair

auburn waves over her shoulders,

Before it said her hair was dark and went to the middle of her back. Now it’s red and goes to her shoulders.

I pushed my long,

Now we’re back to long

Looking down, I could see the soft swells of my silk and lace covered breasts on full display.

I thought she was poor? But can afford silk undergarments and a shit ton of makeup?

wavy reddish-brown hair

Now it’s wavy reddish-brown. This is comical!

cranberry red highlights in her warm brown hair.

This would be lowlights, not highlights. I doubt he would know the difference anyway between low and high with hair

Last night it was if I had been split in two the moment he forced three fingers

Ouch! No thank you

“Baby, are you alright in there?” called Gregor through the door. “I’m fine. Sorry, the… the marble was just cold on my bare feet,” I lied.

This does not even fit in the scene

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Worried you’ll start screaming my name the moment you see my cock?”

She’s already seen it and tasted it

As we walked down the hallway, I glimpsed us in a gilt-framed mirror.

As we walked down the hallway, I glimpsed up at us in a gilt-framed mirror.

As I swirled my tongue around her clit, I pushed a third finger into her narrow passage.

Every time authors write this, it makes me cringe

Curled into claws, her fingers drove into my hair, fisting the short wavy length as her

There we go again with her hair being short

I positioned my cock at her tight entrance and viciously thrust into the hilt,

That poor girl!

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