Reclaim (Release, #2)

by Aly Martinez

I’m so sorry That was…”

I’m so sorry That was…” Incorrect punctuation or capitalization, need to add a period after ‘sorry’ or change ‘That’ to lowercase.

The understanding that, while now is not our time, there might a future where one day the two of us find ourselves on the banks of our creek again, this time with free minds, whole hearts, and a lifetime to share.

The understanding that, while now is not our time, there might a future where one day the two of us find ourselves on the banks of our creek again, this time with free minds, whole hearts, and a lifetime to share. Missing word, need to insert ‘be’ after ‘there might’.

“Hey!” I shouted at a uniformed officer as he approached my cell.

“Hey!” I shouted at a uniformed officer as he approached my cell. Incorrect word choice, need to change ‘a’ to ‘an’.

Finally, Joe must have been able to find me a lawyer in town willing step on some Caskey toes—and hopefully Caskey skulls too.

Finally, Joe must have been able to find me a lawyer in town willing step on some Caskey toes—and hopefully Caskey skulls too. Missing word, need to insert ‘to’ after ‘willing’

“I was trying get better for you—for us.

“I was trying get better for you—for us. Missing word, need to insert ‘to’ after ‘trying’.