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She could just make out a yellow one, green one, and a third either navy blue or black.
Does it MATTER what color they are?
As soon as the hostiles clear out, we keep going.”
Won't they wonder where the dead guy is... and maybe look to see who killed him?
Caucasian man.
African-American woman
Their races are important because...?
“Wilcox will escort you through town to make sure you find your way,” the man said. “This place isn’t somewhere most folks would choose to be tonight, if you know what I mean.”
So they are beating people and stealing everything but they're going to escort him out of town as soon as he gives them his stuff.
unsure what to do.
Riiiight...
Eventually, they’d realize they could kill a cop—real or fake—as easily as anyone else. Luckily, they hadn’t come to that conclusion yet.
Sure...
bean bags rustling and crackling
Crackling? Bean bags crackle?
too scared to speak or make a sound lest
She's not supposed to speak!
He should’ve taken the time to put on his snowshoes.
You can't move fast in snowshoes.
Hispanic man
Let's mention another race...for a completely unknown reason.
Thick, blocky nonfiction books
It's dark. How does she know what kinds of books she's passing?
White plaques at eye-height listed numbers and letters too dark too read. Her frantic brain couldn’t have unscrambled their meaning even if she’d tried.
And why would she try when she's being hunted and in danger of dying?
groggily.
Why is she groggy?
1911 and a Smith & Wesson M&P 2.0,
Sigh...
409
We just have to see those brand names.
kicked weakly,
He growled in pain.
If her kick was weak, why would he growl with pain? Couldn't have hurt that bad.
“In here!”
I think he knows she's in the library.
seemed to know where they were headed even before they did,
Really?
supernatural demon of myth and nightmare.
Oh good grief.
a gutless cur
A gutless CUR? That's something you don't usually hear someone being called. lol
peeked around the corner.
This big, tough guy was " peeking" around the corner? Definitely the wrong word to use.
Rite-Aid
For a tiny town, they sure have a lot of large stores and restaurants and businesses on this street.
she was present,
This expression is used way too much. I don't know if it means because she just zones out of does she have some sort of split personality where her own personality disappears.
Ski-Doo
Yamaha
More unnecessary brand names.
just trying to pass the time.
Even though they know someone has killed a bunch of people on their side. Right.
She yanked on the helmet while Liam pulled on another one
Wow! With death staring them in the face.theyy think to put on helmets.
He’d rip the man’s phalanges
He can't just say bones?
He didn’t use his flashlight or approach the property head-on like most people. He was sneaky. An invisible threat.
Good grief. I don't think anyone would have approached head-on with a flashlight if they'd just gone through what these two went through. I'm sure anyone would have been "sneaky" (silly word for a thriller) in this case.
No one’s been there for at least a week.”
How would he know this? He can look at a house and know someone has been gone for more than seven days? Sure.
that red slash of a mouth,
What's with this "red slash of a mouth"? Supposedly he has a mild, unthreatening look...but she keeps saying this.
Tylenol
Brand, as usual. How about "something for her pain"? That would have worked.
a.m.”
Always unnecessary stuff. Wouldn't she know it's not the afternoon???
near the barn door,
So...he couldn't try to find a way to secure the door from the inside? Maybe he could sleep?
“He’s going to cut it out, and then he’s going to kill me.
I think that WOULD kill her, wouldn't it?
angry-sang
Huh?
spending the afternoon at a ski resort,
So they can't afford a spare tire but they are spending the day at a ski resort. That makes sense.
Noah had used it for something
Something like charging a phone?
pleasant features.
No "red slash of a mouth"?!
packed an overnight bag and stormed from the house,
Just leaving her child behind. Got it.
Her family had always used Glocks with a trigger safety. Forgetting the Ruger’s safety switch was a stupid mistake.
Please let me hurry up and finish this mess of a book.
