“Nice attempt! A few notes. The caps lock is a little aggressive. Mustache isn’t a selling point. Let’s cut the ex-wife thing. And what does ‘will pay’ mean in your world?” “I will pay for dinner and such. Just want them to know that I’m a gentleman,” he says earnestly. “That’s awfully chivalrous, but that might read as you are willing to pay for more than dinner . . .” I nudge him with my elbow. “Oh,” he says as his cheeks blush up.
