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rules”.
rules.”
tedious but
tedious, but
Thorn knew deep in his heart that the correct way to handle the distress of a broken relationship was to face the reality of it head-on.
I think this observation may be true.
last
least
ago so
ago; so
freedom so
freedom, so
A wretched hive of scum and villainy.
“A wretched hive of scum and villainy.”
“Every lock has a key, and all the keys are different. You wouldn’t try and open every lock with the same approach, why would you assume that your quest has one approach? Genghis Khan stole lots of stuff and he never snuck anywhere.”
height to
height and mass to
left, instead of hiding
left; instead they are hiding
theory.”
hypothesis.”
them.
it.
(Note: He would be experimenting with the effects of the venom on the arrows; not the arrows themselves — thus "it" not "them.")
pointed nervously
Remove the [Return] between these two words.
As Thorn examined his heart, he found a desire for reconciliation. His goal in playing Nova Terra was to be free and if he allowed himself to be bound by what they had done he would never reach it.
Not many people could make this choice. I doubt that I could in such a situation.
had bows
had a bow
sharp maw
sharp toothed maw
tinier implements
tinier the implements
they needed
they still needed
monster at
monster’s head at
while healed
while being healed
couple cookies.
couple of cookies.
RMS.
“RMS.”
day
days
week
weeks
Roaring out in
Roaring in
tale
tails
would
to
‘master’.
‘master.’
kneeled.
knelt.
that
who
to that,
to do that,
if
when
Screaming out in rage, he roared out.
Screaming in rage.
This is the curse of power. Once you have it, you must keep it. And to keep it, you have to get more of it.”
I'm not sure one must continue to gain power to keep it; but one must use it to keep it — that is a certainty.
possessions, my
possessions, and my
Immediately, Thorn could see how important a named armor set having was.
Immediately, Thorn could see how important having a named armor set was.
girls
"women" is probably more appropriate, given their ages and the author might consider chahing all references to the "girls" to reflect a less patronizing tone.
‘nobody’.
‘nobody.’
