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Rescue Her Heart
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Read between December 29, 2020 - January 9, 2021
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Truly a great friend.
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They only just met yet this is the second time friend has been used. They don't even know each other how are they friends already?
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Catherine could tell her friend was frustrated.
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Again with the friend comments.
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when she flew with her father in the past.
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So she hasn't completely forgotten her father. I feel there is a huge disconnect in the story. Instead of shopping and flirting shouldn't they be dealing with the reasons behind the accident and why Catherine was leaving the planet?
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Everyone knew the most exciting and upscale bars in the galaxy were those which revolved around Prospo.
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Her father is missing. She's Lost everything trying to get to her aunt. But they are going to some club to party?
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Nat brought her to a lesbian club.
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You know it is fiction when lesbian bars still exist. Especially Ones you can take an 18 year old to.
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Catherine knew she trusted Nat completely. With her life, in fact.
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She just met her how could you put that much trust in someone?
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In reality, it was almost no time at all.
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One day
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“I was only making sure no laws were being broken,”
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What about under age drinking?
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“I almost forgot. A message came for you.”
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How the heck can an android almost forget anything? Is his hard drive full?
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The brake lights on the pirate spaceship flashed ahead of her.
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Why would there be brake lights on a spacship?
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She had no doubt the woman wanted Catherine
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Using the term the woman seems more like something you would use to refer to someone unknown to you. Why not just use the pronoun she here?