The Land: Predators (Chaos Seeds, #7)

by Aleron Kong

Make up your mind. Is the soul BASIC or POOR???

It SHOULD BE "Movement Speed IV" with 40% increased movement while in forested areas. This sign will show where this correction should be made:》》》》.

Shouldn't this subskill say "ENHANCED Imbued Arrow".........?

This should be "V", not "III"......!!!!!

This should be "50%" NOT "30%".........!!!

He already upgraded to the 4th "IV" level of "Movement Speed" in the last book.....! 》》》》

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10 minutes to run a mile??? I remember getting an 'F' for the day in Physical Education in High School if I didn't run a mile under 4 minutes.... And, I was in no way a 'runner'....!!!!

was IN uncharted...

NOT ten, One HUNDRED!!! Unless, you plan to rewrite a few of your books....

I was told in the last book, after Richter had achieved level 15 in his ANALYSIS skill that he could see the skills of the people, and monsters, he analyzed... So, where's the Code Breaking skill and his Adventure's Mark??? And, all of the other skills that he has acquired through the years. Even if this isn't his TRUE status page, it should show his skills...!

Again, where's the upgrade that Richter got on 'Analyze' Skill Level 15???

*** After the word 'there' should be the word 'also' ***

DUMMY!!! All he has to do is ask Alma to show him what she saw while flying overhead looking for badguys!!!!

Instead of 'could', the more proper word for this saying is 'SHOULD'....

In my humble opinion, I think that the term "Prairie Dogs" would be of an accurate description. Look up what a prairie dog is, and then tell me that you disagree. I doubt that you will...!

Breathe. Not breath.

I hate to tell writer's what to write. But...... I really think that instead of 'dad' here, Mr. Miagi would serve better...

In earlier books, you referred to Alma's magic as "Psychic" magic. Now you are calling it 'Thought' magic. Please don't dumb down your excellent books. If someone doesn't understand what "Psychic" magic is, let them look it up themselves. They may actually learn something.

You call her magic "Thought" magic all through the book... Except on her status page... Make up your mind!!! With Richter, his resistances to Blood and Spirit magic are called just that. The same with Chaos magic. Why do you have to shift years in yet another book, and start calling Alma's magic "Thought" magic? Instead of Psychic or Mental???

In every other book, you've called this "Psychic Energy". What's with you changing Mental/Psychic magic to Thought magic???

"he had other things on his mind AT THE TIME. " TO AVOID THE DOUBLE USAGE OF THE SAME WORD, 'had'.

You need to use the plural word, "weaknesses". Because you're talking about two different things.

The name of the Enchantment should be "Sonic Attack" and needs to clearly state that it's Level II or Level III......!!!

When 'Randy' gave Richter the report of the fallen, he had said that 7 of the medion sprites had died. If so, then why did 9 of the pixies enter the sakeru??? GET YOUR NUMBERS AND YOUR STORY STRAIGHT!!!! I KNOW THAT I AM NOT THE ONLY ONE WHO WILL SEE THE INCONSISTENCIES!!!!

A "pitbull" would be a more accurate description. Since their jaws 'lock' in place after they bite down on their prey...

Make up your MIND!!!! Are they BASIC or COMMON soul stones??? And, what about his bonus when making soul stones. They're supposed to be one full level higher...!

"had BEEN transported".....

"THAT", not 'the'.....

Before, you said that he had four left. Now you are saying that it's six...... MAKE UP YOUR DAMN MIND!!!! AND, get your damn story straight!!!!

If the Dungeon of Bloody Chaos increases the monsters health by 10%, and it has 35 points in Constitution, then the Health of this monster should be 385, not 391... What am I missing here????

HERE, you call it "Mental Magic", but in other parts of the book, you call it "Thought Magic"..... Make up your damned mind before I end up having to take a trip to ATL, GA. And have a little chat with you!!!! LOL!!!!

Why do you call this "Mental", and then call it "Thought"...? Make up your mind!!!

I thought that Sion was level 19 in the last book!!!!

If Sion is level 17 in Air Magic, how come he doesn't have any resistance to it? He should, as he's at the 'Initiate' level...

MARKS

There should also be the "First Meidon" mark....

Ummm, actually it can be used both offensively AND DEFENSIVELY. As, it can literally catch spells right out of the air...

SKILLS

Where are the percentages for levels and affinities????

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At MINIMUM, 50%!!!!!!!

Movement Speed IV (Forest) (Open)

》》》》》 HE ALREADY FUCKING BOUGHT THIS!!!!

Psychic, Mental, or Thought Magic??? Make up your mind, buddy!!!

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When did he finish paying the XP that he owed???

Not "THEY", it should be "THE"............!!!

Sending what exactly???? I know that you MEANT to say that "sending ALMA to let...". But, not everyone who reads this book will understand that........!!! Remember that some people can be MORONS!!!!! LMAO!!!!

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Noncombat Professions

If Krom and Isabella are on this list, then where is the asshole of a gnome, Beyan, at???

You forgot Gloran...

You forgot Benyan...