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The Left Behind Complete Set, Series 1-12, by Tim LaHaye

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Suddenly the only sound was the fire in the sky, and it began to fade as it drifted lower.
Noah Eigenfeld
What a strange combo of sensory descriptors
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“began to fade” and “drifted” make me think it wasn’t all that sudden.
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This sentence is so confusing. Fire is more of a visual cue, but it's used to describe the sound. Then, it's unclear which of the sound or the fire is drifting lower and/or fading. I know something is…
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The Left Behind Complete Set, Series 1-12
The Left Behind Complete Set, Series 1-12
by Tim LaHaye
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