“Dangedest thing I’ve ever seen.
Nobody swears in this universe, even with the Christians gone. Say "damn." Even Star Trek used "damn." Or cut the "darns" and "hecks" and "goshes" altogether. The placeholders draw attention to the unreality, where I'd assume you were just being thrift in your writing if explitives were entirely absent. It's the end of the literal God-damned world, and none of these characters feel more than inconvenienced.
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