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“It’s yours. Take it. Claim it. Don’t hold back.” “You don’t know what you’re asking,” I warned.
Im laughing
“Tell me you’re on the pill,” I said.
Were having this talk NOW???
“I can’t wait to feel you come.
Gonna be waiting a long time with this acton
Be a good girl, and come on your boyfriend’s dick.”
this is the worst smut i think ive ever read LMAO im so sorry I love dream harbor so im not judging i stg
don’t ask me why I knew our firstborn would be a wild-child little girl – I just did.
Threw up in my mouth. Peace and love
her muttering, “It shouldn’t be hot,” over and over again, like she was trying to convince herself she wasn’t into it.
This is a woman who gets the ick after 2 more weeks of this hookup lol
reveling in the way she squirmed in response. “We are going to have so much fun together.”
For 2 weeks. Hell yeah for 2 weeks
heated eyes staring straight into mine, the tile cold against my back as he thrust inside,
Still unclear on the logistics of this, let alone with a 6'4" man
Waking up next to Josh had cured me of that.
Its been 2 days
Tyler’s favorite financial channel.
His what T_T credit where its due this is the first actual douchey thing youve said about Tyler
I’d asked him again if he was serious about punishing me, and the clipped “Yes” he’d given
I just
Thank goodness we’d picked up the morning-after pill.
You are a healthcare professional! You dont take plan B when youre on HBC! It prevents ovulation thats it, THIS ISNT HOW ANY OF THIS WORKS
The thought should have freaked me out. We’d just become official. It was way too soon to start thinking about what our kids
Girl
I wasn’t joking when I told Josh that he’d be the one with the stalker if he tried to end things. My obsession with him was
GIRL
He’d pulled a single-serving popcorn bag out of the box of food he’d packed and was eating it with the kind of glee reserved for someone watching a Real Housewives reunion episode.
this is fanfic
Josh had gone from an easy-going, loveable golden retriever to a full-blown hellhound in the blink of an eye.
I want to be clear Josh has at no point given golden retriever
Junior sniffed. “Uncalled for.” Josh popped another piece of popcorn into his mouth, grinning as he chewed. “This is fun for me.”
this is exactly how I used to write dialogue when I wrote in middle school and early high school and I guess that's why I'm being so hard on it. Self cringe is hard
No body, no evidence of a murder. Pretty hard to convict on circumstantial evidence alone
Okay I let it slide the first time you said it but I can't do it a second time. All evidence is circumstantial lol. Literally the only direct evidence is like a video of the crime happening
“Am I being Gilmored right now?” He nodded. “Yup. He’s going full Emily on you.” Junior looked back and forth between us, confused. “The fuck are you talking about?”
I wish I knew
If Lorelei could get through a few hours with her mother for Rory’s sake, I could get through dinner with Nico and his spawn. My uncle was bad, but Emily Gilmore made him
my biggest criticism with this book is that it's 400 pages. Let's get an edit or two in here. Ice Planet is a perfect book because even though it's every bit as insane and one-shot fanfic as this, it's a tight 200. That's important
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I was a grown-ass woman. I would not pout about the fact that instead of having kinky sex with my boyfriend, we had to go help fix the mess we’d made.
do you promise
I allowed myself to be still in his embrace, to live in this brief, perfect moment of being held by my boyfriend.
we're starting to repeart 'my boyfriend' and 'my girlfriend' to such an excessive and emphatic degree that I'm beginning to question if the author was rejected from something more after fling. Let's unpack this
my boyfriend’s welfare,
Just say Josh i beg
I turned away so she wouldn’t see me smile. Should I have felt bad for lying to my girlfriend?
Thank god some fun hehehehe yes DECEIVE HER
Gone was my kind, funny boyfriend.
I dont mean to belabor the point but the amount of my boyfriend my girlfriend is beyond strange atp
realization that he and I might have very different stopping points suddenly made me nervous.
You guys should discuss that
No safe words, I reminded myself. If he pushed me too far, I could simply tell him to stop.
Oh okay i guess thats good
holding what looked like a smaller-sized anal plug,
Hahahahahaha
Maybe it wasn’t true for everyone, but for me, it was a good kind of pain.
Sure jan
“And your family seems nice, but I don’t care about them either. You could all disappear tomorrow, and I wouldn’t lose any sleep over
Lmao
afterward. I could already feel bruises blossoming over my skin from our brief tussle, and I was sure I had more scrapes on me than the night
You guys are freaks
“You liked getting run down like prey.”
This epilogue is twilight but with weird sex
“Make me,” I told him.
I DONT LIKE THIS
Yes. This was what I wanted. To be pinned like an animal out in the open,
H u h
no inhibitions and no thoughts in my head besides how well my boyfriend fucked me.
My boyfriend! :3
Josh grabbed my hair and hauled ...
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HUH
There was something so primal about it, so right.
Is this conservative propaganda
I wondered if my desires went deeper than that, were more instinctual.
H U H
“I love you so much. I love being your prey. I love how easily you overpowered me. I love that your cock is almost too big.
Im.HOWLING
