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the town gossip. At one point she said something about a squirrel biting her and her biting the squirrel back?
i swear this author cannot write women who are “different” without making it just stupid
She nodded and sighed with relief. “‘Little’ is subjective. It all depends on comparison, and frankly, it’s quite rude that you would identify us as such.”
how old is this child ???????
She threw her hands into the air, dark eyes flashing. “Oh my sun god, is he dense? I never thought I would have a brother who was an ignoramus.”
oh my god shut up
After dropping into a split and holding her hands up with excitement, Jess climbed to her feet and pointed to each girl.
why did she do the splits ?????
Finally, Jinx is six, but she’s like the smartest person I’ve ever met.”
ain’t no six year old gonna talk like that. that is the most annoying thing ever
“You’re boring us,” Jen, I think, called over her shoulder as they strolled away.
jesus christ these kids are annoying. i hope they die
If you did, you would realize that the primordial chaos of life, like the cold weather outside, is not what is important.”
what the actual fuck what was the point of a LITERAL 6 year old saying this
The queen arched a perfectly trimmed eyebrow. “You’re quite annoying, aren’t you?”
yes she is
“Where is Aran? What did you do with her? You better not hurt her,”
girl you are misgendering your friend
Sure, Cobra had eaten me out in a closet, low-key the best moment of my life,
dude we’re not even 50 pages in and this is the second use of lowkey
“Cobra is a professional, but there’s no way he’ll be able to keep his cool when he sees your horrid flesh. Afterward, he’ll beg me to let a gorgeous fae fuck him.”
what kind of logic is that
The only way to kill an elite fae was to rip out their heart and eat it. The stronger the fae,
ew
Sadie was the only woman I talked to. She didn’t count.
cause she’s not like other girls
smirked at her. “So, Kitten, you want to do
at least it’s not little girl anymore
Most girls had sex by my age, but I hadn’t worried about my unpenetrated status.
… there has got to be a better way to word this
“Would you have sex with me if I weren’t a prisoner?” I asked the fae guard.
girl why would you ask that ?????
“It’s a no from me. I’m not going down there.”
inside thought bestie
saved my body, but the throbbing in my head told me that my last functioning brain cell had bitten the dust.
i’m surprised this character even had a brain cell to begin with
“Go squeak yourself!” I yelled at the rat as it scurried
girl shut up
“Wow, you look like you’re in great shape compared to the rest of these poor saps. How did you get down here? I started out as a weird captive sex lady, but I’ve been demoted to the dungeon. A part of me feels like I didn’t even get the chance to show off my bedroom skills, ya know?”
again shut up …. this author CANNOT write good dialogue. it’s like she just wrote whatever came to mind. it’s not even funny it’s just stupid. it only fits the character because the character is so poorly developed
“He’s called the Meat Grinder,” I said before Jax could finish.
STOP
A name had power, and if we were ever getting out of here, we needed to establish some.
…. and you chose meat grinder oh my god chat gpt could do better than that
The emaciated man next to Jax said, “Thank you, Meat Grinder. He’s been terrorizing us for years. He’s the worst guard. You don’t know what you’ve done for us.”
…
My irrational virgin brain knew that my crush had just punched me in the face rather than have sex with me.
i don’t even know what to say at this point
Apparently, a grandpa had gone down on me, and I didn’t know how to feel about
ew
Apparently, being five and a half feet tall made me unnaturally short in both the shifter and fae realms.
only took 63 pages for her to mention her night. i’m impressed
I’d just barely pulled half of one of my small boobs over the edge when sweat
was that description necessary
Plus, I was still a little salty about him knocking me out instead of taking my virginity.
WHY would you WANT to be FORCED to have sex with a man while it is broadcasted for the whole realm to see ??? getting knocked out was the better alternative
“Thanks, but nah, I’m good making love to this wall.” I
why
shifted a little, so my small tits weren’t completely smushed.
jesus instead of her small nose it’s gonna be her small boobs mentioned every chapter
His voice was deep but the words lyrical, and he ran his tongue over them like honey.
how do you run your tongue over words ?
Not very girl boss of her.
…. just stop
“Finally, someone recognizes I’m a badass bitch,” I said with relief as we finally
SHUT UP
“You will never be used to it again,”
… if she’s already used it she would have to get re-used to it
led us into a room with showers and clothes and told us to change for the “opening ceremony.” Whatever that was.
…. bestie it’s in the name
In the small room, Xerxes unlocked our chains.
didnt he take them off already
still smelled the offal from the dungeon. I saw Legolas’s
just cause you use big words doesn’t make your book good
would have 100 percent flashed the fae my vagina lips.
why does she use vagina lips so much?
“I’m a competent, short woman.”
…. i’m so tiny omg owo uwu
books, the women who broke barriers and did heroic shit were usually tall and strong. And
they also aren’t annoying as shit and dumb as fuck
Being heckled by a million people because you had vagina lips and small, unimpressive breasts.
OH MY GOD girl we get it you have small boobs. having big boobs is not all fun and games just shut up
Demetre the half warrior challenges the girl from the alpha team. The first person to fall off the platform loses.”
i truly don’t think any besides auntie and adan have said this girls name
Demetre hadn’t used any fae ability. He was fighting like an alpha who couldn’t shift, not a half warrior with fae abilities. I
girl the rules are no powers dumbass
“Boo,” I said as I opened my eyes and shot up out of bed. The fae doctor screamed like a ninny and threw his clipboard against the wall. It rattled with a loud crack. “Not dead yet, bitch.” I made a duck face and held up two peace signs.
STOP this is so tumblr coded
“Yeah, that’s not going to happen. Sorry, but you’re Aran to me. I can’t call you something else now.”
then why even ask ?????? hello that’s so rude
I pursed my lips. “I was actually going to say that it’s super weird that Demetre has beef with me. Like he was my childhood crush, and then he just turned on me like that? So rude!”
a 12 yr old could write better dialogue
Subjectively, after the events in the Fae Games, he had the personality of a schizophrenic rock.
girl how tf do you know what his personality is like ?? all yall did was fight
will bring you Dick’s liver. Warm.” She
what’s with the liver
Like a cool cucumber, I screamed with surprise and caught it before it broke on the floor.
…. 🙃😑
shuddered against him, and he pressed harder against my mouth. His thumb rubbed back and forth against my neck, and he stared down at me with burning desire.
how big is his hand for her thumb to reach her neck while it’s covering her mouth
