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Slowly, Jax positioned himself against my entrance.
you’re not even gonna stretch her out ?? hello her hand can’t even wrap around it all the way and you’re just gonna jam it in
He had big “call me Daddy” energy, something I’d never been into, but I was discovering there were a lot of things I didn’t know about myself.
really cause the amount of times you note how tiny you are compared to them or have said you’re a child compared to them would say otherwise
also reminded me I still needed to lose my virginity.
bestie you have bigger things to worry about
Sadly, that left Cobra and Jax, who were a couple themselves, which made things a tad complicated.
… you were going to have sex with jax last night i don’t think that’s an issue
For the little snake, I would be strong. He had always been around, offering me comfort and helping me when I felt down.
girl you’ve had him for like a week
Rationally, it didn’t matter, and I was a bad bitch who didn’t need a man. Irrationally, I was a woman who just wanted to get railed and told I was pretty.
this is the third time she’s used this set up of rationally and irrationally within the same chapter … wrap it up
I was a PR god.
you’re just annoying
In reality, my eyeball twitched, and I passed gas. Ever
why was that written. author really looked at that line and was like “yep that’s the one that’ll be so relatable”
“One line said, ‘Blood creates pain, it kills the weak-spined.’” Aran’s voice lilted as she mimicked the timbre of the creepy voice. Ascher ran his tattooed knuckles over his horns with frustration. “What do those words mean?” Aran opened her mouth to respond, and I cut her off. “What do you mean?” I asked. “It was pretty self-explanatory. Blood creates pain and kills the weak.” “What?” Ascher stared at
do NOT make me agree with sadie
was a cool, collected cucumber with fantastic mental health and an unwavering core of strength.
girl find another expression
The trainer said casually, “In one week’s time, you will each have to seduce a fae vampyre, a rare, ancient beast that has been told to murder you if you fail.”
wtf
“Just one alpha carrying another alpha, nothing to see here, folks,” I said to onlookers as a stadium worker gave me the stink eye.
i’ve come to the realization that i don’t mind the writing when it’s in a different pov but this author canNOT write ‘different’ women without making them cringeworthy and just straight up annoying and stupid. you can be a strong independent woman without being annoying
“So do we think I can appease the vampyre by dancing sexy?” I asked Aran,
no
In my fifty years, I had never seen a female gasp and flail her arms like she was fighting an invisible assailant, while trying to execute a simple jog.
i imagine she runs like phoebe from friends
I was usually a boss at repressing emotions and ignoring them, but I kept waking up in the middle of the night.
literally none of your actions have shown this
Therapy Topics running—Cruel and unusual punishment. Should it be classified as torture?
literally not a topic for therapy
29 SADIE DANCE BATTLES & SPARKLES
i swear if it’s an actual dance battle i’ll dnf
Suddenly, Aran jumped up and landed on the ground in a full split.
why
After a while of running in place, pretending to go shopping at the store, and swirling around like a snowstorm, I heaved and stopped moving.
again why
Aran had me lie on the dance floor and stretched my leg forward toward my hips.
IN THE MIDDLE OF THE DANCE FLOOR
was becoming a pattern, attending parties with Aran and forgetting about the other alphas and Xerxes.
this is only your second party and first with Xerxes … how is it a pattern
As usual, his black hair was a shiny, straight mass that hung to his butt.
does anyone’s hair not reach their ass ?
“Why?” Xerxes asked as he swirled his twin blades lazily in his fingers.
good lord someone get this man a fidget spinner
“Oh, I have some stress relief. We should go to a sex clinic tonight!”
STOP this is not the sex positive/empowerment move you think it is. it comes across as crass. there are far more important things than this girl losing her virginity. i understand the author is probably trying to come across as “the male characters in books always want to have sex so why can’t the women” but the author CANT WRITE so it’s just bad and annoying and unnecessary
Yes, I was aware my mental health was hanging by a thread.
take a shot ever time she mentions her mental health
We were practically submitting to the patriarchy by not embracing our sexuality and shoving our vaginas in everyone’s faces.
absolutely not
I didn’t think being a virgin was that big of a deal. Just because a dick hadn’t penetrated my vagina hole, that didn’t make me less of a woman or some bullshit.
your thoughts and actions suggest otherwise
If I failed, I would be MURDERED.
that would honestly make the book so much better
For “power,” I wrote, “alpha saber-toothed tiger”; for “strength,” “mauling”; and for “weakness,” “running.”
… i can’t
How was I supposed to know that they viewed me as theirs? They’d literally never said anything.
HELLO THEY HAVE ALL BEEN SAYING THAT YOU ARE THEIRS
He didn’t shift into a beast of lore like the rest of us; he was a beast of lore.
… you’re just figuring this out
