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The bear that just attacked me is coming in for another round, and I duck again, dropping to the ground and rolling under the beast as I snatch a fallen arrow. It roars and shakes its head as it spins around, trying to dislodge me.
Trying to dislodge him? He doesn’t say he’s mounted the bear or clinging to it. What is this supposed to be? Find him? Stomp him? WTF?
Still, my stomach is empty
Where is the bread and cheese?
Instead of the crowded stands, a mirrored dome now spreads over our heads, reflecting everything trapped beneath.
Can they see creatures reflected nearby? Use it like a rear view mirror or driving camera.
“It’s done,” I whisper. “It’s over.”
They haven’t thanked the dogs. The dogs are massive heroes and deserve at least some ear scratches.
“Ready?” I ask him, and he nods. I close my eyes, and something
We’ve already said ready and let’s do this enough!
he smiles and then holds two fingers to his lips before dropping his chin.
What’s with the two fingers to his lips? Is it a boy-scout salute variation?
he insisted his daughter start volunteering in the hopes of turning her into a better person, she found her passion for helping the needy children of The Umbra. Apparently, she’s working on a proposal for Erevan to build a new school and orphanage.
And she probably hopes to catch his eye and become queen.
We also cleared out the forest of my father’s unnatural creations.
This is just a checklist of things, and I think it could have been written better.
