More on this book
Kindle Notes & Highlights
His arms and legs may have been bound,
might
“Say Madge,”
“Trust me Madge,”
She may as well have been
might
“No Torg!”
as he stepped gleefully off the stage. Of course he bloody was.
Was what? Gleeful? That doesn't follow grammatically.
It creates a sort-of
No hyphen
The man lay a gentle hand
laid
cool, night air.
No comma
“Yeah listen to the man,
and rest my friend.
rectangular, wooden noticeboard.
No comma
Behind, lay
No comma
looked up at the sign post
signpost [as it has been twice previously]
filled the Bard will dread.
with
festival, Bard.” Torg added.
Bard,"
“Your summons are required.
Your presence is required OR you are summoned
They reached the tent to the Reconnaissance Parliament.
tent of
The tent differed greatly to the rest
from
with a domed ceiling that didn’t quite close at the top.
Different from no roof, which is what a previous sentence said it had.
“Yes, please Captain.”
Five days ride
days' [compare "a day's ride"]
They may not be beholden
might
He may as well earn his keep
might
She may well have been right
might
Now there was something he didn’t expect to hear today.
hadn't expected
“No Tallew,”
I took ya for a softy Mister Brute,
“Yes I managed to survive just fine.
Sazari said he would hit his growth spurt soon, but that was three years ago now!
had said
No I do!
No,
He looked like he thought this whole gala was above him.
beneath
It’s all lord’s halls
lords'
The man may have been
might
no padrello.”
“Ah a pity,”
Ah,
for the book, miss.” Torg said,
miss,"
Rumours indicated that some may live
might
They were generally harmless despite their namesake.
name
He was under her protection as well as his orders. How was she to do either
Garbled. He was under her protection, and she was under his orders; how was she to fulfil either responsibility...
for the star’s sake!
stars' [?]
“you should not have rode
ridden
“Yes my Lord, gladly my Lord!”
His elderly father was murdered by the Bard;
had been
Each home belonged to the Empire and were
was
Leave it pet!”
isn’t that right Eamonn?”
As you so eloquently put.”
put it
They may have been petty thieves,
might
