The Wraith King (The Rise of Northgall, #1)

by Juliette Cross

“Why would she risk her neck so stupidly?” asked Soryn.

My identical comment applying to every dumb thing Claire from Outlander does

Goll grinned so wide I could finally see his pointed canines. Rather than repulse me, my heart raced with excitement. How could that possibly be?

This book is so weird

“I’m not unaware of a male’s needs. I’m not ignorant.”

Grammar issue that bugs me. Double negatives. “Not unaware”. Just say “I am aware”.

I jolted when I felt his warm mouth on my pussy.

Wtf is a cunny LMAO

A roar of cheers and the beating of chests greeted Goll and Una as he escorted her into the great hall for the first time.

Not me reading this as a roar of cheese

Speak ill of her, you will regret it. Touch her, and you will die.”

Err we go

“But this cunt is mine.”

Lmao STOP. JAIL.