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I saw a guard, and his face was scarred from what I couldn’t guess.
so when you say scarred the assumption is it’s an older wound that is healed so having “what i couldn’t guess” afterward makes negative sense because then you can’t be referring to the recent attack. so now you just randomly have this line that serves no purpose and is eating up at an already exorbitant word count
I think sometimes that you still need me or want me, but I don’t know if that’s right. You deserve better than me being with you because I feel obligated.” I sighed. “And you deserve better than being someone I settle for.”
this took 2 seconds to resolve and she’s been pushing the conversation off for like a year just because she’s selfish
“I want to start from the bottom. I’m planning on eliminating the Eight label first. There’s a lot of construction we need to do; and I feel like, with a little bit of work, the Eights could be absorbed into the Sevens. After that, it gets tricky. There’s got to be a way to get rid of the stigmas that come along with the numbers, but that’s my goal.”

