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alright
We get a chapter from Mason
My gaze lingered on her and wondered what she was like.
..., and I wondered... Because a gaze can’t wonder.
You’re a shady, motherfucker.”
No comma
Ethan and Strauss had front row seats, leaning against Logan’s locker, were grinning from ear to ear.
If you take out the clause set off by commas, the sentence doesn’t make sense. Ethan and Strauss had front row seats, leaning against Logan’s locker, AND THEY were grinning from ear to ear.
“Would you if we kicked you out of your own basement?”
Would you BE if...
Occasional sections of chapters from Mason.
My jaw clenched as I remembered the hurt in her eyes when she realized I wasn’t going to answer her. Shit. I couldn’t. If I did … no way in hell. I couldn’t. That was the end of it.
Bullshit problems from not communicating, which I never like.
Nate to reverse.. As
Extra period
“I know,” he grimaced
Not a dialogue tag
“I was wondering,” he stopped,
Not a dialogue tag
““Yeah.”
Extra quotation mark
Sam’s clothing were next to
Clothing WAS or CLOTHES were
but is eyes got wide
...but His eyes...
and you would’ve really though that.
...really thoughT that.
His was gruff
Voice?
Malinda. She always had a quick retort for Logan, and when there was a lull in conversation, she’d grill Mark on his love life. He was mortified when she suggested getting a vibrator for his girl. “Mom!” he cried out. She shrugged. “You’re not a virgin, and I’m promoting her pleasure as well. The girl will enjoy it a lot more. They don’t always, you know.” She scanned the rest of the table. “I’m sure you two bucks think you’re the stud for all those does,” she remembered me and amended, “well maybe just you and Logan, but I’m telling you. Girls fake it eighty percent of the time.”
😂😂😂
That opened a whole new channel of adoration from Logan. He wanted to know it all.
The rest of the conversation was a question and answer forum from Logan while Mark looked ready to throw up. I even caught Mason listening intently to her. He told me later that...
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She loved sneaking tofu into dinner. She loved sneaking tofu into dinner.
This full sentence is repeated
Alright,
sobbing on other
...on THE other end.
alright
We’ve got a messed-up parents just like you.”
No a
The regret won’t eat at you then”
Missing period
“Alright.
I knew I could have her anyway I wanted and some of those times, I’d take her up on the offer. That was all Kate had been to me. I had an itch, and I used her to scratch it.
I regretted it now.
Very cliche story line
get close to Samantha Strattan meant getting close to Mason and Logan Kade.
...getTING... meant...
“Logan couldn’t love me because he’s in love with you. It’s finally out there now.” She paused and an abrupt laugh came from her. “Logan’s in love with you.”
The soap opera continues... This story is all about the mean girls and the queen bee going down, just like getting hit by a bus. But again, it’s a guilty pleasure. This has much less sex than I remember these books having. Maybe I was thinking about “The Original Crowd”. I want to reread that soon. But I’m going to finish this series, at least the main part of it.
