When Jasper got married to his ex-wife, Verity, I’d been devastated.
Oopsie? This story is Jasper's POV, and Jasper is all the way gay, not bi. Verity is Liam's ex. Where are the beta readers here? First payed when the correct word is paid (twice), and now she's done a sudden character swap. The story isn't even alternating POV - which would make this more confusing, I grant, but would increase the likelihood of an accidental character swap.
