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I must say that I enjoyed the first half a lot more than the second half.
The worldbuilding was great - as was the mystery of how it all happened - and what exatly had happened. Also the main character was humorous and fun to read.
In the second half we see only a bit of the world anymore - and besides one major reveal nothing new appears anymore. Also the witty character starts to doupt himself more and more. That would be quite fine, if it was a progression of the character, but at first he is a ...more
The worldbuilding was great - as was the mystery of how it all happened - and what exatly had happened. Also the main character was humorous and fun to read.
In the second half we see only a bit of the world anymore - and besides one major reveal nothing new appears anymore. Also the witty character starts to doupt himself more and more. That would be quite fine, if it was a progression of the character, but at first he is a ...more

For starters, it's fantasy from 1st Person POV, which I have a soft spot for since I'm writing it myself. It's different and for the most part the author does it well. I liked the character of Rojan Dizon, even if he did have a bad habit of repeating himself over and over....and over.
And the city of Mahala is pretty awesome.
The best part about this book is the magic. Though I have to admit I was confused by Rojan's abilities several times throughout the story. He's a tracker and can change his f ...more
And the city of Mahala is pretty awesome.
The best part about this book is the magic. Though I have to admit I was confused by Rojan's abilities several times throughout the story. He's a tracker and can change his f ...more

The overall writing quality was good. The author does repeat quite a bit, constantly reminding of what we read in the last chapter. The book is also really anti religion and has a poor portrayal of women. There is also quite a bit of language in the book. I'm not planning on reading the next one.
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I only picked it up because she's an active member of Fantasy Faction. But it is an awesome story. Great magic system and characters, and the world it's set is pretty awesome aswell.
First chapter is a great introduction. Not slow or draggie. I do recomend it. ...more
First chapter is a great introduction. Not slow or draggie. I do recomend it. ...more


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