Pretties (Uglies, #2) in Crazy Challenge Connection

Oct 04, 2011 Jen • Just One More Page rated it liked it · review of another edition

Shelves: adventure, young-adult, stunning-covers, romance, series-to-finish, dystopia, science-fiction

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Apr 11, 2012 Melissa (ladybug) rated it really liked it · review of another edition

Shelves: yearly-challenge, 4stars

I don't understand it, but I liked this book better than the first book. In this book, Tally has become "Prettie" and is as air headed as the rest. But, David and the Smokies have a plan to help her to find her brain again.

I found this book engrossing and easy to read. I loved Zane and found myself rooting for some of the characters. I felt bad for other characters such as Shay and the other Crims. I did have some problems though and these caused me to rate it as 3.5 stars. It would have easily ...more

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Feb 22, 2011 A. S. rated it it was ok

As I entered puberty, I exited the YA section of the bookstore. I felt too grown up for what I deemed beach novels for girls with little gray matter. As an adult, I realized that I was cutting out a whole section of potentially good stories with this point of view. The problem is that as a (technically) young adult, I now know how to critique a story much better than before. Thus, from the get-go, I realized that Scott Westerfeld's second of four books in the Uglies series, Pretties, has some se As I entered puberty, I exited the YA section of the bookstore. I felt too grown up for what I deemed beach novels for girls with little gray matter. As an adult, I realized that I was cutting out a whole section of potentially good stories with this point of view. The problem is that as a (technically) young adult, I now know how to critique a story much better than before. Thus, from the get-go, I realized that Scott Westerfeld's second of four books in the Uglies series, Pretties, has some serious problems. The first is that Westerfeld, like most old people, cannot write natural-sounding teenage slang and dialogue for his life. The second is that the novel contains far too many recent YA genre tropes to make for a fresh story.

The first problem makes itself apparent by the first chapter. I understand that slang and names would have changed in a millennium (and that passage of time was not made clear in the first book), however there should at least be an explanation of some of the slang. The nicknames, for example: why the are the endings "-la" and "-wa" tacked onto the end of certain names? Also, I understand that the characters, once changed into Pretties, are supposed to be vapid creatures. However, the word "totally" suffers an abuse in Westerfeld's novel that only rivals Stephenie Meyer's flagrant misuse of "chagrin" in the Twilight books. Unfortunately, the words "bubbly" and "bogus" suffer an alarmingly similar degree of use. The writing style is jarring to the point of unreadable. I as of this point am seriously questioning why readers were extolling these books, because if I hadn't already gotten the rest of the books in the series, I wouldn't bother continuing.

The second reason I dislike this book is that the love-triangle deal I predicted would materialize in this book did so. While it's not Peris/Tally/David like I originally thought (it's Zane/Tally/David instead), its very existence irritates me. Why does a YA novel featuring a female main character always involve romance? Why is it always a love triangle (almost always two guys fighting over one girl)? If you have to include a romantic subplot, can't the protagonist know what she wants from the get-go so she can focus on the task at hand? Additionally, a large chunk of the plot really doesn't go anywhere--it's meaningless "action" sequences that could be cut out. Some parts were so boring I just skimmed over them, just like I did the "action" sequence in Twilight.

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Oct 01, 2015 Melanie rated it it was ok

Shelves: kindle, yabrc

Not a good as the first book. Didn't like how the book started with Tally already being "pretty" and the time jump from the first book. Also, the love triangle was frustrating and just didn't grab my attention. :( Parts were good, though! ...more

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Nov 08, 2013 Athena Macmillan rated it it was ok

Shelves: ho-hum, ya-fiction, apocalyptic-and-dystopia, 2013-reads, sci-fi, boring

I saw a few negative reviews to this, and when I started reading I didn't really understand why people didn't like it as much as the first. Needless to say, I soon was making excuses to not read it each evening. I would rather organise my ebooks by genre and then subgenre than pick it up again. And I did. In the end I forced myself to read it and the only reason that I gave it two stars instead of one is because it had an intriguing ending. I would quite happily go the rest of my life without re ...more

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Sep 03, 2011 Mandi rated it it was amazing

At first, I wasn't too fond of Pretty Tally. She was too much of an airhead to me. But, as the story progressed, she became more like the old Tally. The story was great. I can't really say that I liked it more than Uglies. I loved them both in different ways. But, this is definitely something I would recommend to anyone. ...more

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Feb 13, 2013 Tallyho rated it really liked it

This book let me down in that the story made me a bit irritated. LOL. It's well written, which is why I was upset with the direction it took. (The same reason I'm irritated with George RR Martin) I do like the story line, and I continued on to the third book no problem. :) ...more

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May 21, 2011 Sahar Siddiqi rated it liked it

It was an ok book. I mean, I really hated Shay for what she did at the end and I rooted for Tally and Zane, but the series so far is just way too girly for me.

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