Longing Looks in Sapphic Books > moderators
Status:
"On page 64, I'm not loving the repetition of things. Every time heartstone is mentioned were told that it's how the automae 'eat' basically every single time. I get it already. And then repeating the layout if the castle and kingdom and garden and then what's beyond it. It's all so tedious and not needed AND brought up during moments of tension building making all tension suddenly stop and flatten." — Oct 05, 2025 05:38AM
"On page 64, I'm not loving the repetition of things. Every time heartstone is mentioned were told that it's how the automae 'eat' basically every single time. I get it already. And then repeating the layout if the castle and kingdom and garden and then what's beyond it. It's all so tedious and not needed AND brought up during moments of tension building making all tension suddenly stop and flatten." — Oct 05, 2025 05:38AM
