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OOOOO GUUUURRRLLLL LOVE TRIANGLE ALERTThis is like some of the Norway x Reader x Iceland fanfics I love to read! I've made my own, but I don't think it'd be allowed in this group? It's got a hint of sexual stuff, but it's barely there... It's nothing too graphic. It can be found in one of my writings in my creative writing area, though. *shameless self-promo*
Sometimes I think of doing a character x reader including my own OCs. Do you think that'd be kinda decent idea? I've got OCs that my friends are totally in love with. xD Mostly my toms. especially Blackclaw/star.
I might check it out. :3 Talking about WC sites, another great WC/SB/SD site is Warrior Cats Roleplay Forums (WCRF). It was made a few days before the official Warrior Cats Forums (WCF)was shut down, so most of the members of the site are from the original WCF. If you ever wanna join it, you can find me as Birdsong231.
Nice!If I can get seperate threads for my stories, i might finally get someone who can tell me if my writing is good or not. My style is seperate from my RPing. No one looks at my writing, so i cant tell if im improving or not. ((Sorry for crappy spelling and grammar. Autocorrect doesn't work on tbe internet.))
I'll check it out when I get back home, then. :3
Is it free?
Help!" I wailed and scratched the little window. I was trapped in here. My housefolk had just thrown me in here. My leg hurts. It's bleeding... "Help!" I spotted a cat running across the road and over to me. I let out a heavy sigh of relief."What's wrong?" Worry glittered in the cats eyes. It was a she-cat.
"I need to get out of here," I meowed through the glass. "My housefolk threw me in here. I hit the wall and I hurt my leg. Please help me!"
"I'll get help! Just stay here!"
I gave her an unimpressed look. "Oh no, I could never stay in one place! I have so many to her places to check out!" I said sarcastically and glared at the she-cat.
She rolled her eyes. "I'm Cinderpaw," She mewed quickly. "What's your name?"
"Bracken, I think," I mewed. "Yeah, Bracken. That's the name my mother gave me. My housefolk haven't given me a name,"
"Ok, I'll be back soon," Cinderpaw ran away and fear bubbled up inside me again. What if she would come back? What if I was going to have to go through this for the rest of my life?
After what felt like hundreds of years, Cinderpaw came back.
A huge black tom stood in front of the window and started scratching at it.
I shook my head. "It doesn't work that way. I don't know how to open it. You're going to have to break the window,"
"But how?" He asked me. He clearly wasn't born as a housecat.
"Um, run into it," I rolled my eyes. "But once you break it, careful with where you step. Glass is extremely sharp," I fell backwards and let out another wail. "Please help me,"
"I'm getting you out of there, even if I have to lose my life," the tom growled and the other cats behind him gasped. I couldn't hear what they were saying, but it was clear that they were saying to not risk it. "I am in charge of who I save who I don't! I am leader of this group. Now are you going to help me save this kittypet or not?"
I heard my housefolk walking towards the door. "Run! Don't let them see you!" I called and I swiftly moved myself into a corner, hoping my housefolk wouldn't see me, but he did. He held a small, fragile object in its' paw and he threw it at me and when it shattered, a sharp tip sliced through my flank. I wailed again and it left me, locking the door again. I staggered over to the window again. "It's gone," I cried, tears rushing down my face. "Please, please, please get me out of here," Blood dampened my pelt and I crouched in a different corner when the cat told me he was going to going to do something. I gave him a confused look when I saw the cats line up behind him. "Push," He called behind him and I finally figured out what he was doing.
"Are you sure that's going to-" I squeaked in surprise when they actually broke the window. The cat let out a terrified yowl when he hit the hard wall.
"Blackclaw! Blackclaw, are you ok?"
I stood up and limped over to the cat. "Please be alive," I murmured and nudged him.
"I'm fine, Sil," He called and stood up. The side of his mouth was bleeding, not heavily. "Get on my back. It'll be easier on me," He meowed quickly when he heard my housefolk walking towards us.
I clung onto the black cat for dear life and buried my face into his back when he jumped.
"Go, go, go!" Blackclaw (I think that's his name) yowled. When he stopped I opened my eyes. We were hidden in an alley. I slid off his back and my eyes widened. "Thank you!" I mewed. "Oh, thank you! I owe you my life!"
"It's ok," Blackclaw sat down next to me and he stroked my back with his tail. "I couldn't leave a suffering cat behind,"
I looked around with wide eyes. "I haven't seen the outside world in moons...my housefolk have never let me outside before,"
I stood up and purred. I felt free. I felt like I could fly, even with an injured wing. That reminded me of my leg and my flank. I looked at myself and then up at the other cats.
"You're coming with us," Blacksclaw mewed after he stopped watching me.
I smiled at him and nodded. "Ok,"
Blackclaw had showed me around his camp. Everything he said fascinated me. "We both need to go to the medicine cat now... My jaw stings..."
Deadlight, ShadowClan's medicine cat, poked her head out of her den. She sighed when she looked at Blackclaw. "What have you gotten into-" When she saw me her jaw dropped. "Get that thing in my Den now!" She ordered and rushed back inside.
"I'm a thing?" I asked Blackclaw.
"Bah, ignore what she says. She didn't mean it that way. What she meant by that is that you look more dead than alive,"
"Ugh, that's how I feel..." I mewed and followed him into Deadlight's Den.
"Put him in my nest and sit down next to him. I'm not letting you go outside until I look at that jaw of yours,"
"Bracken needs much more attention than I do. I can live with a bleeding jaw for a while longer," He stood up to leave but his mate, Silvermist stopped him.
"You are not going anywhere until she's looked at your poor jaw!" She squeaked.
I suddenly felt like there were too many cats around me, so I curled up a bit and tried to block out the sounds.
"Sil, please leave. I don't think he's been around this many cats in moons. The last thing we want is a half dead cat to run back to twolegs... And I don't want to see him heading back to the twolegs who've abused him," I heard Blackclaw whisper to her and she quietly left.
I looked over at Deadlight. "Can I sleep a for a while, please?"
"Sure, one second," She padded over to me and gave me two seeds. "Poppy seeds," She mewed. "They'll help you sleep,"
I ate them. I trusted Blackclaw's Clan, and I felt him watch me until I drifted off to sleep.
A year later I was sitting in front of the Highrock. I was going get my warrior name!
"I, Lionstar, leader of ShadowClan, call upon my warrior ancestors to look down on this apprentice. He has trained hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend him to you as a warrior in his turn. Brackenpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend your Clan, even at the cost of your life?"
"I do!" I squealed excitedly. I didn't care what the others thought of my reaction. I had trained so hard to get to this day and no one was going to take it away from me.
Lionstar purred and then continued. "Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Brackenpaw, from this moment you will be known as Brackenpelt. StarClan honors your courage, and we welcome you as a full warrior of ShadowClan!"
Lionstar laid his muzzle on my head and I licked his shoulder. When Lionstar left, Blackclaw rushed over to me and nearly knocked me over. "I knew you could do it!" he purred.
"Thank you for letting me have a second chance," I buried my face into Blackclaw's shoulder.
"You're most welcome," Blackclaw licked the top of my head and nudged me closer to the cats waiting to congratulate me.
((Thid is chapter 8 in one if my fanfics.))
OH YEAH. I forgot about this...Birdsong231 [ Hawkfrost | Shani | Tayah ]
name My name is Angelina, but I prefer "Birdy" or something else. (view spoiler)
age I'll be turning 18 this year!
grade I'm not sure, tbh. xD
rules Yes! And I like them.
other I normally write fanfiction based on the Warrior Cats series, but I don't use cannon characters. I only use my own characters, and just random names I come up with. Another fanfiction I write is Naruto. There are canon characters, but I mostly only use my own OCs. As for original stories, I have a paranormal romance. I need a title for it though... It's current title is absolute crap, and has no meaning at all... "Light and Darkness"... Blehhhh...
