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this is a prologue to a story in dovelopment

PROLOGUE
Cara the Peace dragon lay down in her cave. She had been feeling sick and not even Phoebe the healer dragon could cure her. She saw a dark shadow approaching. She felt too dizzy to get up. She could only watch the shadow getting closer. She knew that the shadow was an hour's fly from her cave.That was a good thing about being a dragon; you have a very sharp sense of sight. Cara looked at the sinking sun, turning the sky a light shade of orange.
When the shadow finally landed in Cara's cave the sun had already set. It was Silver the Fate and Destiny dragon. She landed as silent and as smoothly as a cool summer's breeze.
"Cara, I came as soon as I heard the news!" Silver Exclaimed. Cara smiled faintly, if a dragon could smile.
"No need to worry!" She said, barely a whisper. Silver had a worried look on her face and she was very fidgety.
"I had a vision last moon fall!" She told Cara in almost a hiss. Cara frowned.
"Isn't Mia the one with the visions?"
"I don't know!" Silver complained.
"What was in this... vision?" Asked Cara. Flames where now coming out of Silver's nostrils.
"I saw twenty kids___" She began but was cut off by Cara's feeble snort.
"Twenty kids? Is that what you're so worried about?" She demanded.
"These aren't normal kids!" Cara frowned at this. "These kids have the aura of dragons!"

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