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for kingdom of ilcaname: Kyle
age: 14
hair color: blonde
eye color: blue
skin color: white?
height/build: grr...um...tallish?
family: unkown
greatest fear: being resposible for his friend's death/downfall and his friends dieing/getting hurt
greatest strength: great friend, strong leader. strong willed.
relationships: later on in my story he has a crush on Sophia
weaknesses: he'd do ANYTHING to keep his friends safe, like sacrificing his life for them
power: Air (element)
weapon: his powers and a 3metres sword
favorite food: no idea
quirks: he day-dreams and tends to look at the sky
more to come later
(view spoiler)
^^_ don't worry, i'll find a spell to make you a witch ^_^
'cause you are a muggle who discovered about us witches and wizards and dumby needs to erase your memorie
'cause you aint a wirch, i am since i am at hogwarts right now ^_^
yeah, they said cool ^_^
DID SOMEONE CALL MY NAME?
no, its dishonorable to run away, its seen as cowerdise...so this is what happened:
tara is a girl who pretended to be a guy and trainned as a knight, now she is getting taken to Mortem Castle to see the Prince, Alexander (Alex) :D..by teh way, in nmy story, death and dar warriors= good, White warriors = bad :D
mines of a 'white pretty'
hmm... ok here is a sample chapter of teh kingdom of ilca:(first draft of tara's first chapeter)
Tara
Tara leaned against a basket of herbs. She was sitting on a patch of grass, waiting for one of the dark warriors to finish regestrating. thier boat while the others were getting it ready for departure. One dark warrior was siting next to her on a crate, makeing sure she didn't make an attempt to escape. She cursed herself for the hundredths time for getting herself caught. She had gotten away with it since she was 7! Why did all of that effort to stay inconspishous was all for nothing!vShe could try to escape, she had already come up with many strategies almost subconsiously. But that wouldn't be honorable, she had been thout that its more honorable to go with your defeaters rather then run away.
Tara knew who eacha nd every dark warrior that was accamponing her. The one that was gaurding her now used to be her good friend. His name is Zach. He had only resently become a dark warrior. He was 19 and on his very first mission as a dark warrior. He kept glancing at her, disbeliving that she was a girl. They had spent three years trainning as squires together before he was chosen by a knight. If Tara hadn't been fo...............
(sorry for any typos, please give degative as well as posetive critisisem and be truthful!!)
Brooklyn wrote: "HIGH SCHOOL HERE I COME!!! sorry, I'm kinda excited...":D i have been in highschool ofor 3 years now adn now i am in year 9 ^_^
......its the system in aussie
Kayla SHADOWPUNCHIN'SONIC!! wrote: "NOT THE STORY!!! I LOVED THE STORY!!!"OMG LOL!!!! ^_^
.....i don't get school ending happiness till december...but i do have term brakes... term 2 ends in june 29th ^_^ YAY!
YAY
:'( ugh do i have to re-write it?
..........?
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I WROTE A WHOLE LOT AND THEN....NOOOOO THEN MY INTERNATE CRASHED!! :'(
