Robin’s Comments (group member since Feb 05, 2012)

Robin’s comments from the The Unknown Awesomes group.

Well, for one. Nella, Landon, Bella, and we could get Lynne or someone are all gonna be there. Not only will this kid be killed {causing significant uprising from his privileged family}, but everyone will see it. Making everyone against Max. While Bella is still kind of totally falling in love with Max.

Main Player: Kyra {But Robin created 'cause she has no patience}

Name: Prince Haymitch {That's HEY-MITCH. Like. "Heeeeyyy, Mitch!}
Age: 20
Appearance: Seriously good-looking. Like. Model, yo. Tall, defined facial features, high cheekbones, glistening gray eyes, serious muscles. Dark brown hair that's kinda short, but side parted and neat. Deep, melodious voice.
Personality: Arrogant. Super self confident. Attracts all the woman and really doesn't mind that. Pretty reckless at parties/balls/gathering/really after having multiple drinks.
Background: Heir to his throne, eldest son. Pretty jerky about it all.

{I'm gonna create this dude's character profile...Just to get us going while we wait.}

{You must write a killer murderer...I COULDN'T LET THAT NOT HAPPEN.}

{That was REALLY sappy HEY WHERE'S MY DRUNK PRINCE PLEAZE}

{Gonna bounce out...Lates!}

Bella nodded again. "I love you," she murmured, her eyes drooping shut.

Bella yawned. "Maybe. I guess. Will you stay?"

She snorted a little. "Are you kidding? I just screw around..."

Bella shook her head gently. "I don't wanna leave you alone while I sleep," she muttered.

YESSSS

(But on/off 'cause watching Netflix...)

HI ROBIN IS HERE

WHO DOES MAX WANT TO KILL PLEAZE?
OHHOLYMOTHERFREAKINGSONOFBATMAN
What if I make some young dashing prince who pops in drunk to call on Bella and Max is like "You little slug you get your hands off my girl!" and then he kills her?!

I love the way you wrote that.

Ummmmmm. We could have Max accidentally kill someone because his rage causes him to lose control?

Oh...Uhhhhhh...Wanna kick it off, then?

Amy shook her head. "I'm basically invisible. Haven't really met anyone but you," she explained, frowning.

Wars are messy to write though...They take a lot of planning and a lot of characters and they're hard to keep going...
Can we take a minute and evaluate characters again?
Castle:
Max and Bella-Are we waiting for someone? I thought we were waiting for someone...
Amy and Robert are fine so far

I'm not really sure what's going on with anyone else besides that Damian and Violet are. Somewhere. I dunno where.

Personally, I think we need to kill off someone. Quick, easy, dramatic. Can we get a murder? Who wants a murder?

Amy wrinkled her nose at him. "Well if that's how you really feel then..." she said, pretending to be hurt. "I'll just leave to your royal superiority."

"Yes, yes it is," Amy said, mock serious. "No, no, no, I was kidding!" she said as he frowned. "And I suppose you could see if you could 'borrow' Neil's or something..." she murmured.