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SpottiPup407’s comments from the ♥♥♥Cinderpelt Lovers♥♥♥((Organization in Progress)) group.

Slashstar had stepped up."Ancient Riverclan had just fought off rogues.We were walking by twolegplace, when a band of rogues attacked us.They call theirselves, Bloodclan.I lost three lives in that battel.Other than that, Ancient Riverclan is going great.We had found a flock of geese, and the pery is doing well now."

He bowed his head, and waited fro another leader to step up.

((gtg))

(I thought Jordan has Hawkblaze, oh well))
"You are brave, every cat knows that, every cat but you.All you know, is that you did the right thing, and that everyone is proud of you, good job."

Ravenscreech prodded towards her."You are truely the bravest cat Starclan has ever known, or ever will know.But right now, I know, since the med. cat isn't here right now, i'll treat you, I know alot about medicine cat stuff."

Ravenscreech jumped at Scourge, grabbed his neck, and bit into as hard as he could.

Scourge started yowling, and fled with his tail between his legs.The rest of the cats followed him.

"No!You can't kill us, if we kill you!"Scourge and the others leaped at her.

Ravenscreech grabbed Rapidkiller as he leaped towards Flamestorm."You leave our deputy alone!She is feirce, she is brave, it's who she is, and she's willing to kill you!"

"Not unless you let Trigger go!",Scourge hissed.

"Um... Scourge, I really think we should get out now.", replied Rapidkiller.

"No way!Are you going to give up and let your leader die!When she goes to Deathclan, she'll think it's our fault, she'll think we're weak.Are we weak?No!We're Bloodclan!"

Ravenscreech came up by Flamestorm, and encouraged her to keep going.

The Bloodclan cats backed up.
*In Starclan*
"Flamestorm, breathe, walk, fight, and most importantly, live.", Flickertail said.

"Flamestrom can't join us!She has to live with Ancient Thunderlan still!Flamestorm is a great cat, she has done Much for Ancient Thunderclan, her life can't be over now.She has a destiny, still.She has her clan depending on her.She has her life that should still go on.She has every cat as her friend.She can't let them down.Flamestorm, stay alive!Don't join us!"

*Still meanwhile, in Starclan*

"Flamestorm!", Flickertail wailed.

((I don't know why Jordan's barely on.I'm on everyday, for about an hour or more.))

All of the Bloodclan cats stared at her, their minds blank.

"No!", Ravenscreech screeched.

All the cats got off her.

They all came at Flamestorm, jumping at her and biting her.It was like a rat attack, just with bigger rats.

((No one will kill Scourge!Plus, I already said that I would delete the kittypet rp that isn't being used.))

Scourge turned around, and dug his claws into her belly.

Rapidkiller came and jumped onto Flamestorm's back, too.

Flash jumped onto Echofrost's back.

Flash
tom
warrior
a really light yellow
Amber eyes
loves it when battles come

Scourge ripped away, though, chunks of fur from his neck got turned off.He fled for a second, and came back with more Bloodclan warriors."Attack!", he yowled.

((I'l delete the one that people don't use.))

((Sorry, I was in the bathroom))

"If you kill Trigger, I'll kill you!",he hissed, jumping at Flamestorm.He bit into her hind leg, as hard as he could.He let go, and jumped at her neck, and bit as hard as he could into her neck.